Comment from Caitriona

Excellent

Love this, with an undertone of a Midsummer Night's Theme. I love the visual of the leaves pirouetting and the transparent shifting of the seasons. Well used verse for this one. The original scheme is marvelous.
Thanks and Good luck! C.

 Comment Written 10-May-2020

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reply by the author on 11-May-2020

Aw thank you so much for such a sweet review!

Comment from January L'Angelle

Excellent

Well done! This type of poem seem complex. I enjoy all of your alliterations. You have a few and they all work so beautifully. This is such a pretty poem. Great writing. -January L.

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 Comment Written 10-May-2020

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reply by the author on 11-May-2020

Thank you for reading and for the lovely review!

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

An intricate poetic form which you have handled with skill. The inverted lines have been stitched in seamlessly. I particularly liked the harsh assonance of your last verse depicting winter. Nicely done.

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 Comment Written 10-May-2020

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reply by the author on 11-May-2020

Hi Tony, thanks for reading and for the review!