The Opposition
This poem offers what the Thesaurus does not.24 total reviews
Comment from ESOSTINE
The arrangement of the poem is very creative and it flowquite well with measured rhythm. Truly, competitions are not entirely bad. Sometimes they bring out the best in us. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2020
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The arrangement of the poem is very creative and it flowquite well with measured rhythm. Truly, competitions are not entirely bad. Sometimes they bring out the best in us. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much.
Comment from RodG
I truly like your approach to this prompt. It is easy to VISUALIZE what this child is painting and how hard she Is concentrating on the ocean for her Nina. We know she is painting for herself, not competing. And I don't know what the antonym for competition is, but your poem shows us. Rod
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2020
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I truly like your approach to this prompt. It is easy to VISUALIZE what this child is painting and how hard she Is concentrating on the ocean for her Nina. We know she is painting for herself, not competing. And I don't know what the antonym for competition is, but your poem shows us. Rod
Comment Written 05-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much for your thoughtful review.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from January L'Angelle
I loved this poem/story. I feel like I'm so noncompetitive by nature. I love all the things that you showed that are the antithesis of competition. This was beautifully written. I like the formatting too. Awesome! -January L.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2020
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I loved this poem/story. I feel like I'm so noncompetitive by nature. I love all the things that you showed that are the antithesis of competition. This was beautifully written. I like the formatting too. Awesome! -January L.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much, January
Comment from Diana Kane
This is an interesting take on competition. Enjoyed it. It makes the reader think about it from different perspectives. Great job! Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2020
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This is an interesting take on competition. Enjoyed it. It makes the reader think about it from different perspectives. Great job! Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 04-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2020
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Thank you, Diana