Papa's Approval
Co-Authored with Bill Bishop (aka Commando)26 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
Yes, times sure have changed. And not for the better in many ways other than all the advanced technologies, which makes it nice to venture back in time with your story. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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Yes, times sure have changed. And not for the better in many ways other than all the advanced technologies, which makes it nice to venture back in time with your story. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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Hi Ric, Thanks for stopping by to read and review the first chapter of this novel. We're glad you enjoyed it! Yes, times have changed. However, it's great that through writing and reading, we can still go back to the good ol' days! Sorry for the delay in responding. We're busy preparing our first co-authored novel for publication this month. Lots of work, but worth it. HURRAH! We've already written Chapter 2 of Moonshine and Muscadine Wine and will post it as soon as we can. Wishing you all the best. Take care and God bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Mary Furlong
What a charming story! The dialogue is perfect. I felt as though I was eavesdropping on a private conversation. And there is just enough description of the beautiful scenery to make me see and experience the story. Well done.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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What a charming story! The dialogue is perfect. I felt as though I was eavesdropping on a private conversation. And there is just enough description of the beautiful scenery to make me see and experience the story. Well done.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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Hi Mary! Such awesome comments! We're so glad you enjoyed this first chapter and it brought you right into the scene. Sorry for the delay in responding. We are publishing our first co-authored book this month and the preparation is taking up most of our time. Very exciting! We've written Chapter 2 of this new book and will post it as soon as we can. Wishing you all the best. Take care and God bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
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Congratulations on the new book. How exciting for you. Let me know when it becomes available.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I love how this started, way back in early school years. Now Elsie Mae is sixteen, and Lester wants to marry her before going off to war. From the invite, it seems that Elie's dad has already decided when he asked him to come for dinner. I look forward to the next part. Well done, Cathy. :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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I love how this started, way back in early school years. Now Elsie Mae is sixteen, and Lester wants to marry her before going off to war. From the invite, it seems that Elie's dad has already decided when he asked him to come for dinner. I look forward to the next part. Well done, Cathy. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 05-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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Hi Sandra! We're so happy you enjoyed this first chapter about Grandpa and Grandma when they were young and in love. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing it. So glad you'll be following along! Sorry for the delay in responding. Our first co-authored book is being prepared for publication and it's lots of work! Exciting though! It will be published this month. YAY! We've already written Chapter 2 of Moonshine and Muscadine Wine and will post it as soon as we can. Wishing you all the best. Take care and God bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy :))
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Charming story--characters are delightful, believable, banter is amusing, dialog sounds natural and flows easily. I will be looking out for the next chapter! Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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Charming story--characters are delightful, believable, banter is amusing, dialog sounds natural and flows easily. I will be looking out for the next chapter! Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 05-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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Hi Liz! HURRAH! So glad you enjoyed this first chapter. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing it. We apologize for the delay in responding. Our first co-authored book is being prepared for publishing by the end of this month and it's taking up most of our time. Exciting though! We've written Chapter 2 of this story and will post it as soon as we can. We're thrille d you'll be following along! Wishing you all the best. Take care and God bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
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Congrats on the pending publication!
Comment from lancellot
You two wrote a good chapter. I like the narration and I love what papa had to say to him. Going off to war, does make a man want to snatch up a girl for two reasons: to keep her from other men, and to have someone to live for.
A very good piece.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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You two wrote a good chapter. I like the narration and I love what papa had to say to him. Going off to war, does make a man want to snatch up a girl for two reasons: to keep her from other men, and to have someone to live for.
A very good piece.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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Hi lancellot! Sorry for the delay in responding. We've been busy preparing our first co-authored book which will be published by the end of this month. We're glad you enjoyed this first chapter. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing it. Chapter 2 has been written and we'll post it as soon as we can. Wishng you all the best. Take care and God bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from sibhus
Sounds like such simpler, better times back then. This is a really good chapter. I like your chacters they seem like people you want to get to know. Has a good pace to it that makes an interesting read. Looking forward to future chapters.
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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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Sounds like such simpler, better times back then. This is a really good chapter. I like your chacters they seem like people you want to get to know. Has a good pace to it that makes an interesting read. Looking forward to future chapters.
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Comment Written 04-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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Hi sibhus! We're so glad you enjoyed this first chapter. Thanks so much for the reading and reviewing it. We are also very happy that you will be continuing to follow along. Sorry for the delay in responding. Our first co-authored book will be published this month and preparation is taking up a lot of our time right now. Stay tuned though--we've already written Chapter 2 and will post it as soon as we can. Wishing you all the best. Take care and God bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy