Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "Infinite"Musings of an old man -2020
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Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear JLR, This post, in a moment had me floating in space, trying to figure out where you were taking me this time! And there I was regretting that I did not look up the definition for "annulus" before I started this review. So somewhere between there, and the end I did get lost, in space and time.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
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Dear JLR, This post, in a moment had me floating in space, trying to figure out where you were taking me this time! And there I was regretting that I did not look up the definition for "annulus" before I started this review. So somewhere between there, and the end I did get lost, in space and time.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2020
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Suzanna, thank you for your time invested in reading and commenting on my poem.
Comment from giovannimariatommaso
Like a wheel within a wheel the revolving circle that never ends. I enjoyed reading this and the words you chose to begin the journey and to complete the imagining process, reminding me of the famous song "The Windmills of your Mind", by French composer Michel Legrand and English lyrics written by Americans Alan and Marilyn Bergman, 1968. giovanni
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
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Like a wheel within a wheel the revolving circle that never ends. I enjoyed reading this and the words you chose to begin the journey and to complete the imagining process, reminding me of the famous song "The Windmills of your Mind", by French composer Michel Legrand and English lyrics written by Americans Alan and Marilyn Bergman, 1968. giovanni
Comment Written 19-Aug-2020
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giovanni, I will search for this composition, thank you!
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To simply your search, here: Noel John Christopher Harrison was an English actor who had a hit singing "The Windmills of Your Mind" in 1968, and was a member of the British Olympic skiing team in the 1950s. He was the son of the actor Rex Harrison. giovanni
Comment from amada
I like a lot how this poem begins, "Just imagine..." It brings to mind the song, the good wishes, and so many beautiful things. Together with another of your lines, lightly exhaling, makes a relaxing summer read.
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I like a lot how this poem begins, "Just imagine..." It brings to mind the song, the good wishes, and so many beautiful things. Together with another of your lines, lightly exhaling, makes a relaxing summer read.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2020
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amada, thank you for your comments!
Comment from equestrik
This is an interesting write. It is magical and inventive as you invite your readers to also imagine with you. It goes really well with the picture. I think it is a good entry for the 'circles' event. :)
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This is an interesting write. It is magical and inventive as you invite your readers to also imagine with you. It goes really well with the picture. I think it is a good entry for the 'circles' event. :)
Comment Written 19-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
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thank you for your time invested in reading and commenting on my poem.
Comment from ESOSTINE
I found the flow well paced and enjoyable though I could not visualize the import of the work till I read the pretext and it became clearer. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
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I found the flow well paced and enjoyable though I could not visualize the import of the work till I read the pretext and it became clearer. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2020
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thank you for your time invested in reading and commenting on my poem.
Comment from Boogienights
It kind of blows the mind doesn't it? I got a little dizzy from all the imaginings, but it was all very cool, like a stream of consciousness. Thanks for sharing, quite interesting
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It kind of blows the mind doesn't it? I got a little dizzy from all the imaginings, but it was all very cool, like a stream of consciousness. Thanks for sharing, quite interesting
Comment Written 19-Aug-2020
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thank you for your time invested in reading and commenting on my poem.
Comment from Vanna1
That line is a tongue twister. - even if it is as big - strains the flow. Other than that, it is a great poem. I cannot grasp the imagery maybe correctly but I see circles?! Cool image.
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That line is a tongue twister. - even if it is as big - strains the flow. Other than that, it is a great poem. I cannot grasp the imagery maybe correctly but I see circles?! Cool image.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2020
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Vanna, yes circles which are infinite in measurement
Comment from lyenochka
Wonderful entry for the club challenge! I was thinking about all the circles in the rotation of the spheres in the universe, too. Now I'll have to come with something new. Great job!
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Wonderful entry for the club challenge! I was thinking about all the circles in the rotation of the spheres in the universe, too. Now I'll have to come with something new. Great job!
Comment Written 19-Aug-2020
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Smiling, I can't wait to read yours...
Comment from Jacob David Collins
This reminded me of the song, 'the circle of life,' from The Lion King. I enjoyed reading this piece. I thought it was well written and your writing flowed well.
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This reminded me of the song, 'the circle of life,' from The Lion King. I enjoyed reading this piece. I thought it was well written and your writing flowed well.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2020
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Jacob, perhaps should be my tag to the poem..
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I like the roundness of this poem, with every circle and every ripple in time we get closer to the center so we can start again. 'Boundless into infinity, your circle revolves
around an encompassed sea of stars
which circle ever more infinitely
into the space from which
you took that first step." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
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I like the roundness of this poem, with every circle and every ripple in time we get closer to the center so we can start again. 'Boundless into infinity, your circle revolves
around an encompassed sea of stars
which circle ever more infinitely
into the space from which
you took that first step." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
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Iza, I am smiling with appreciation for your time and comments, thank you!