Flicker
Lune Poetry Contest38 total reviews
Comment from RetroStarfish
This poem says so much in so few words. "Light of hope fades..." This perfectly captures the darks days of winter.
Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
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This poem says so much in so few words. "Light of hope fades..." This perfectly captures the darks days of winter.
Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2020
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Great reveiw zanya
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a Beautifully lune poem. On dark wintry days light of hope fades to a flicker. Beautiful photo to go with your words. Good luck in the contest.
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This is a Beautifully lune poem. On dark wintry days light of hope fades to a flicker. Beautiful photo to go with your words. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2020
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Great reveiw zanya
Comment from Janet Foor
Very nice Lune poem. Lights do flicker and fade on these dark and sometimes dreary days. Especially this year with the pandemic all around. Thankfully, we are reminded at this special time of year that there is one light that never flickers and will never fade.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
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Very nice Lune poem. Lights do flicker and fade on these dark and sometimes dreary days. Especially this year with the pandemic all around. Thankfully, we are reminded at this special time of year that there is one light that never flickers and will never fade.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 26-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
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Great review filled with hope. zanya
Comment from RodG
The scene in your lune is easy to visualize, but beautifully enhanced by that photo. Literally, a flame is lucky to flicker on a wintry day. Symbolically, our hopes do flicker during these lock-down times as COVID surges anew. Rod
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
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The scene in your lune is easy to visualize, but beautifully enhanced by that photo. Literally, a flame is lucky to flicker on a wintry day. Symbolically, our hopes do flicker during these lock-down times as COVID surges anew. Rod
Comment Written 26-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
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Yes - we do need hope these days -thanks for sharing zanya
Comment from Sherry Asbury2
Very nice verse. I hadn't thought of winter this way, but you are right..everything dims and the days are so short...It certainly gives us the idea of why our ancestors had so many fears and strange beliefs. Nice verse - well-written.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
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Very nice verse. I hadn't thought of winter this way, but you are right..everything dims and the days are so short...It certainly gives us the idea of why our ancestors had so many fears and strange beliefs. Nice verse - well-written.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2020
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Very interesting review zanya
Comment from country ranch writer
A flicker of light brings sins of hope for one and all reminding us all to never give when times are tough . When things get tough the tough keep going!
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A flicker of light brings sins of hope for one and all reminding us all to never give when times are tough . When things get tough the tough keep going!
Comment Written 26-Dec-2020
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Thanks for reading and reviewing zanya
Comment from mermaids
There is an eery feel to your words and I think most of us can relate to your words. We are living in dark times with the hope of light to come. Excellent use of words that are filled with emotion.
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There is an eery feel to your words and I think most of us can relate to your words. We are living in dark times with the hope of light to come. Excellent use of words that are filled with emotion.
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Comment Written 26-Dec-2020
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Great review zanya
Comment from lyenochka
Great use of the candle as a metaphor for hope during a dark time. With the increase of Covid cases and deaths this winter, it has indeed been a dark time. Best wishes in the contest!
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Great use of the candle as a metaphor for hope during a dark time. With the increase of Covid cases and deaths this winter, it has indeed been a dark time. Best wishes in the contest!
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Comment Written 26-Dec-2020
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Great review zanya