Night Birds Sing
Possibilities for my personal growth32 total reviews
Comment from zanya
This is both an interesting and inspiring narrative telling of the joys of the natural world and the peace they bring together with some health challenges along the way - wishing you good health
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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2021
This is both an interesting and inspiring narrative telling of the joys of the natural world and the peace they bring together with some health challenges along the way - wishing you good health
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Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2021
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Thank you, Zanya, for your insightful and encouraging review. I appreciate your wish for my good health. Nature and all of its wonders help me to grow both emotionally and physically. I am inspired by nature and use it to give me the strength to gain a new perspective on my life. Thank you for seeing the connection between the two.
Have a great evening,
Jesse
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Lovely and heartfelt piece--your poetry toolkit continues to serve you well--you seamlessly segued to prose despite some trepidation.
tule=>tulle clouds
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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2021
Lovely and heartfelt piece--your poetry toolkit continues to serve you well--you seamlessly segued to prose despite some trepidation.
tule=>tulle clouds
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Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2021
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Thank you, Liz, for this helpful and encouraging review. I appreciate your suggestion to look up the definition of tule fog and see if the correction needs to be made. Thank you for noticing and commenting on my poetry to prose achievement. I am glad you like it.
Thank you also for your kind words.
Have a great evening,
Jesse
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I assume you mean tulle as in veil n
netting material vs
tule=
a large bulrush that is abundant in marshy areas of California.
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No, I looked it up. When referring to fog, it is spelled tule fog.
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Cool!
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Okay...yes, it is cool!
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Funny that I assumed you were using the adjective tulle as a figure of speech to describe "gauzy" fog--never occurred to me there is an expression "tule fog."
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Yep, I live in California, and that is what we call a certain kind of low-lying fog. It is a legitimate word in at least two dictionaries on Google.
Have a nice day,
Jesse