Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 37 "A Known Truth"Musings of an old man - 2022
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Comment from Raul1
I like how you structured this poem. It is interesting and spiritual. Good job! Excellent work! No mistakes found in your poetry. Thank you for sharing! Good luck!
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
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I like how you structured this poem. It is interesting and spiritual. Good job! Excellent work! No mistakes found in your poetry. Thank you for sharing! Good luck!
Comment Written 10-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry is in good form, Mystery Author.
Your syllable count per line is correct, and your message
is well expressed. I like the verb on the first and last line.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Your contest entry is in good form, Mystery Author.
Your syllable count per line is correct, and your message
is well expressed. I like the verb on the first and last line.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 10-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Jan. Thank you Happy Easter.
Comment from Darkhorse555
an interesting syllable count on the known truth smiling, your words shine a light which gives radiance to a star, I pray you have a blessed beautiful week
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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an interesting syllable count on the known truth smiling, your words shine a light which gives radiance to a star, I pray you have a blessed beautiful week
Comment Written 10-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Thank you happy Easter. 🙏🙏
Comment from LisaMay
Your Joseph's Star poem has addressed the rules effectively. I think the instruction that will mess most entrants up is to have a complete statement in each line. With skilful delivery, your poem reinforces the return of the Great I Am as prophesied. A fitting topic with Easter approaching.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Your Joseph's Star poem has addressed the rules effectively. I think the instruction that will mess most entrants up is to have a complete statement in each line. With skilful delivery, your poem reinforces the return of the Great I Am as prophesied. A fitting topic with Easter approaching.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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LisaMay thank you!
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
You have retold well a marvelous truth within the requirements of syllables for this poem. To anticipate this is the greatest joy we have on earth. I hope it places really well in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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You have retold well a marvelous truth within the requirements of syllables for this poem. To anticipate this is the greatest joy we have on earth. I hope it places really well in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Verna, I appreciate the good wishes! Happy Easter! 🙏🙏
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your Joseph's Star poem is excellent in every respect--skillly and creatively put together, deeply reverent yet jubilant, and very timely. Yes, He is coming again.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Your Joseph's Star poem is excellent in every respect--skillly and creatively put together, deeply reverent yet jubilant, and very timely. Yes, He is coming again.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Janice, thank you! Happy Easter!
Comment from Anne Johnston
Well done on this poem, great picture and great words. So thankful for the Easter season when we celebrate the first coming of Jesus and all He did for us. We look forward to His soon return.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Well done on this poem, great picture and great words. So thankful for the Easter season when we celebrate the first coming of Jesus and all He did for us. We look forward to His soon return.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Thank you Anne. Happy Easter Season 🙏
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You are welcome. Happy Easter to you
Comment from Carol Clark2
This is a great Joseph's Star poem, with an excellent message. Your syllable counts are great, and each line states a complete thought. I think you did a wonderful job with this poetic form. Best wishes in the contest. Carol
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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This is a great Joseph's Star poem, with an excellent message. Your syllable counts are great, and each line states a complete thought. I think you did a wonderful job with this poetic form. Best wishes in the contest. Carol
Comment Written 10-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Carol, I am honored for the stars and the good wishes. Happy Easter.
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Happy Easter to you, too!
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a good entry for the prompt and is true to the season. We must pray and hear the word of God and be thankful for that He came and will come again.
Good luck.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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This is a good entry for the prompt and is true to the season. We must pray and hear the word of God and be thankful for that He came and will come again.
Good luck.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 10-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Joan, thank you and very happy Easter 🙏
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You're welcome and Happy Easter to you too.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A wonderful picture and your words are faithful and soothing and many will find comfort in this write, a fine Joseph's star, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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A wonderful picture and your words are faithful and soothing and many will find comfort in this write, a fine Joseph's star, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Dolly, thank you so much! happy Easter 🙏🙏