Femme Fatale?
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Comment from Jesse James Doty
You caught my interest with your title. But as I read further it did not keep my interest sad to say. So I skimmed down and found it too long for my taste. To be honest I didn't care what happened to the main characters.
I appreciate you are trying different styles of writing and I just lost interest in the story.
Jesse
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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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You caught my interest with your title. But as I read further it did not keep my interest sad to say. So I skimmed down and found it too long for my taste. To be honest I didn't care what happened to the main characters.
I appreciate you are trying different styles of writing and I just lost interest in the story.
Jesse
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Comment Written 26-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Jesse, thanks.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this story with us. I am a firm believer that for whatever reason, people are put in our path. Some for good, some for bad, but each teach us a lesson. I enjoyed reading.
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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Thank you for sharing this story with us. I am a firm believer that for whatever reason, people are put in our path. Some for good, some for bad, but each teach us a lesson. I enjoyed reading.
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Comment Written 26-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much! Terry.