Comment from Sarah Das Gupta

Excellent

This will I'm sure have a happy ending! Alexander is brave as well as beautiful and Cord a true gentleman! Then setting is well sustained and the conversation moves the narrative forward!

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022

Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.

Comment from Wayne Fowler

Excellent

Nicely written.
being a guy, I missed not having more of the action detailed. maybe with dialogue, as well.
A little narrative describing Cord's feelings as he admonished Ali would be good.
He wouldn't need five minutes to make sure Ali was decent. One would do.
Best wishes.

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022

I guess that's true, but he was in the den. Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Listen, you are a wonderful writer. Your stories are heartfelt, realistic, believable and touching. I personally do not look at and inspect every little detail. For me it is the story, and I realize that in telling a story some details might be omitted. It does not diminish the story so I do not worry about it. Keep doing your thing, and I promise, I will keep right on reading. Your loyal fan, Nolan Miller.

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022

Thank you for your generous support. I really appreciate it.

reply by nomi338 on 26-Dec-2022

I meant what I said. If you write it, I will read it.

reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022

Bless you.

Comment from Ulla

Exceptional

Hi Barbara, another well written chapter and quite dramatic at that. But fortunately they saved the horses, and Ali looked after foul. Just one small thing: Da nada = de nada
Happy New Year, Ulla xx

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022

Thank you for the catch. I often say de nada but never write. I have corrected it. I appreciate the help.

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Exceptional

I hope you had a lovely Christmas, Barbara?
I enjoyed this chapter very much, and had to laugh when Ali got up and tried to save the foal. It had to be Alan, he's been made to look a right idiot, which of course he is. I somehow don't think Ali will be leaving Cord anytime soon. Well done, my friend. Warm hugs, Sandra xx

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Great job on this part of your story, Barbara. I haven't been following, but thought I would pop in and catch the flavor of the story. It is very well written with interesting characters and a lively plot. Great job on all points.

Melissa

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 Comment Written 26-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022

Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

This is written well. The story is proceeding according to plan. A barn fire, Ali's precognition, Griffin setting fire to the barn to.... well, burn it. His quick arrest. The kindness of Ali and the family coming together to save the animals. I think this chapter will go over just as well as the others with your fans.

Have a great New Year.

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 Comment Written 26-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022

Thank you for the kind review.