The Note
Dribble Flash Fiction - 52 words (3rd place)31 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
Dear DD,
This is a powerful flash! The note will most certainly bring the young girl back. I assume she is young if she's living at home. I almost lost my mum to an aneurysm. The Lord gave me another go round with her.
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best for the upcoming contest, Sal XOs
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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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Dear DD,
This is a powerful flash! The note will most certainly bring the young girl back. I assume she is young if she's living at home. I almost lost my mum to an aneurysm. The Lord gave me another go round with her.
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best for the upcoming contest, Sal XOs
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Comment Written 28-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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Thanks Sally, for your review. As for the flash - She found the note eighteen months later - after leaving the house for good. Her mum only had twelve months to live.