Guided by Faith
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Faith Chapter 5 A"Can faith guide our path?
38 total reviews
Comment from Paul McFarland
Nice chapter, Barb. Peggy Barton is a good character to throw into the mix. I can see conflict ahead with her. It was good to introduce the ages of the characters here.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
  |
Nice chapter, Barb. Peggy Barton is a good character to throw into the mix. I can see conflict ahead with her. It was good to introduce the ages of the characters here.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
-
Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from estory
You are the master of these flirtaceous scenes. The chemistry is boiling between these two as they discuss the appearance of the mystery man they are after. There's so much happening beneath the words, how they say it, the innuendo, the feigned alloofness, in this dance of romance. And the dialogue is also very down to earth, the characters always appear so natural, and the dialogue is realistic and crisp. estory
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
|
You are the master of these flirtaceous scenes. The chemistry is boiling between these two as they discuss the appearance of the mystery man they are after. There's so much happening beneath the words, how they say it, the innuendo, the feigned alloofness, in this dance of romance. And the dialogue is also very down to earth, the characters always appear so natural, and the dialogue is realistic and crisp. estory
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
-
Thank you for catching the flirtation. I'm not sure it's coming through. I appreciate the encouragement.
Comment from Shirley McLain
I just ran out of sixes, sorry. You would have one for sure. I enjoyed the chapter. How long are you thinking Emma has been out of college? You did a great job, and I look forward to the next chapter. Have a blessed Sunday. Shirley
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
|
I just ran out of sixes, sorry. You would have one for sure. I enjoyed the chapter. How long are you thinking Emma has been out of college? You did a great job, and I look forward to the next chapter. Have a blessed Sunday. Shirley
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
-
Emma's been out of college less than a month, a couple of weeks actually. Thank you for the kind review.
-
Thanks for answering my question. That clears my mind up a bit. Shirley
Comment from nomi338
Peggy may present a problem, but I am sure that she will be dealt with. It is strange to me how some people never seem to get the message. "He is just not that into you sweetie."
They continue to make themselves look like fools chasing after someone who does not desire to be caught.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
|
Peggy may present a problem, but I am sure that she will be dealt with. It is strange to me how some people never seem to get the message. "He is just not that into you sweetie."
They continue to make themselves look like fools chasing after someone who does not desire to be caught.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
-
Peggy is a piece of work and we'll see her more. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Sounds like they are trying to get a description of the guy who is stalking Emma. When it comes to drawing a facial description, the computer sure does the trick. Story is perhaps another mystery. Like your mystery.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
|
Sounds like they are trying to get a description of the guy who is stalking Emma. When it comes to drawing a facial description, the computer sure does the trick. Story is perhaps another mystery. Like your mystery.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
-
I like to add to my romances. Yes, a mystery too. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from eliz100
This is another excellent chapter. Emma did a great job describing her stalker to the police. I do not see any need for improvement. Have a blessed day.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
|
This is another excellent chapter. Emma did a great job describing her stalker to the police. I do not see any need for improvement. Have a blessed day.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
-
Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
Excellent use of conversation which is used to denote character and drive the narrative forward. Interest in the suspect is heightened and a sub-plot introduced through the jealous Peggy Barton!
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
|
Excellent use of conversation which is used to denote character and drive the narrative forward. Interest in the suspect is heightened and a sub-plot introduced through the jealous Peggy Barton!
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
-
Thank you for the kind review.
-
All best wishes!
Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, this was a great continuation to the story. I loved the scene where the secretary tried to get a date in but didn't quite succeeded. Now, I'm really looking forward to what is happening next. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
 |
Hi Barbara, this was a great continuation to the story. I loved the scene where the secretary tried to get a date in but didn't quite succeeded. Now, I'm really looking forward to what is happening next. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
-
Thank you for the kind reviw and encouragement.