Comment from damommy

Excellent

Having had a tornado pass so close to my home, I could relate very well to this chapter. I don't have a 'hidey-hole' so I went to the safest place in the house. Regarding Emma's problem, I don't think a change of locks is going to be the answer.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023

The lock changing is a good attempt, but you're right. It won't solve the problem. Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Shirley McLain

Excellent

This was an exciting tension filled chapter, especially close to the end. Having lived through a tornado or two in my time, it didn't take me long to feel the tension building from reading your words. You did a great job. Have a wonderful day. Shirley

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 Comment Written 10-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023

Thank you for the encouragement.

Comment from Jim Wile

Excellent

This was an interesting chapter as nature has forced Emma and Seth closer together. I wonder what havoc the storm will have wreaked or if it is symbolic of the storm possibly brewing with the intruder.

I'm wondering if and when Emma will begin resenting the way Seth bosses her around. After all, she is "a grown woman," as you pointed out when her father tried to tell her what to do.

Good chapter, Barbara. Lots of possibilities ahead. Jim

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 Comment Written 10-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023

Emma does stand up for herself. I can promise. It'll be a shock for Seth when he's forced to admit she's grown up. Thank you for the kind review.