Guided by Faith
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Comment from GWHARGIS
Now this was the moment I've been waiting for. I think they have come to a crossroads in this chapter. Physically, the arm around her, her head on his chest. And now he left Ace, his constant sidekick, is spending the night. Really, really good. Gretchen
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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Now this was the moment I've been waiting for. I think they have come to a crossroads in this chapter. Physically, the arm around her, her head on his chest. And now he left Ace, his constant sidekick, is spending the night. Really, really good. Gretchen
Comment Written 07-May-2023
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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Thank you for catching those finer pins.. I appreciate the kind review.
Comment from lancellot
Hmm, another interesting chapter. Things seem to be proceeding according to your tested formula.
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Jake exhaled. "My opinion, young love working its way through life's obstacles."
Pastor Pat and Carl said in unison, "Amen."
- This is my one of my two contentions. There aren't any obstacles to their relationship. None. And the second, the 'mystery' stalker (danger element) is drawn out too long, with no real danger happening.
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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Hmm, another interesting chapter. Things seem to be proceeding according to your tested formula.
notes:
Jake exhaled. "My opinion, young love working its way through life's obstacles."
Pastor Pat and Carl said in unison, "Amen."
- This is my one of my two contentions. There aren't any obstacles to their relationship. None. And the second, the 'mystery' stalker (danger element) is drawn out too long, with no real danger happening.
Comment Written 07-May-2023
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. The stalker will strike next Saturday, so we will have a week in storyland to wait.
Comment from Paul McFarland
This story is coming along very nicely. Looking forward to Seth's and Emma's relationship. I'm sure there is going to be a bump[ in the road somewhere along the line.
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reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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This story is coming along very nicely. Looking forward to Seth's and Emma's relationship. I'm sure there is going to be a bump[ in the road somewhere along the line.
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Comment Written 07-May-2023
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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There will be a few bumps in the road. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I can't remember the title, but I was watching what turned out to be a real horror film. I got so frightened I had to turn the TV off, and fine a good book to read, before I went to bed. How people can say they enjoy a good horror, I don't know. I'm with Emma here. It was a shame I didn't have a Seth sitting next to me!! Lol. Now we have that Crown Victoria up the lane again. Seth has to find out just who is driving it, and why he's snooping on Emma! Well done, my friend, another lovely chapter, but I refuse to listen to your scary music!!!! That's what makes a film so frightening. Play that scene to The Sound of Music, and it wouldn't have have the oomph! Lol. :)) Sandra xx
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I can't remember the title, but I was watching what turned out to be a real horror film. I got so frightened I had to turn the TV off, and fine a good book to read, before I went to bed. How people can say they enjoy a good horror, I don't know. I'm with Emma here. It was a shame I didn't have a Seth sitting next to me!! Lol. Now we have that Crown Victoria up the lane again. Seth has to find out just who is driving it, and why he's snooping on Emma! Well done, my friend, another lovely chapter, but I refuse to listen to your scary music!!!! That's what makes a film so frightening. Play that scene to The Sound of Music, and it wouldn't have have the oomph! Lol. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 07-May-2023
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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LOL Thank you for the kind review and understanding.
Comment from Jim Wile
This was a sweet and humorous chapter, Barbara. It's clear that Seth is starting to waver, and it's becoming difficult to deny he's really smitten with Emma. He will undoubtedly soon realize that he can no longer suppress his feelings about her. I love the slow buildup of this relationship. Very well done. Jim
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This was a sweet and humorous chapter, Barbara. It's clear that Seth is starting to waver, and it's becoming difficult to deny he's really smitten with Emma. He will undoubtedly soon realize that he can no longer suppress his feelings about her. I love the slow buildup of this relationship. Very well done. Jim
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Comment Written 07-May-2023
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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Thank you for the understanding. I appreciate it.