Guided by Faith
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Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
The story is advancing nicely. It seems a shame Carl gets all the hugs, haha! I was a little confused by Elmer and the children who appeared out of nowhere, as I'd forgotten about the reading programme. Maybe a sentence of introduction could have been useful? kay
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2023
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The story is advancing nicely. It seems a shame Carl gets all the hugs, haha! I was a little confused by Elmer and the children who appeared out of nowhere, as I'd forgotten about the reading programme. Maybe a sentence of introduction could have been useful? kay
Comment Written 18-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2023
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Maybe. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from GWHARGIS
Ok. Ms. Barton is rearing her ugly head. I'm glad Emma showed realistic anger at the action. Now I'm waiting for Seth to knock some sense into Peggy. This is starting to really move. Despite all of that, we still don't know who's in the Crown Victoria. Time will tell. Great chapter. Gretchen
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reply by the author on 18-Jun-2023
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Ok. Ms. Barton is rearing her ugly head. I'm glad Emma showed realistic anger at the action. Now I'm waiting for Seth to knock some sense into Peggy. This is starting to really move. Despite all of that, we still don't know who's in the Crown Victoria. Time will tell. Great chapter. Gretchen
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Comment Written 18-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. Yes, Peggy is interesting. I knew a girl like this growing up.
Comment from JSD
You write really well. Your dialogue is naturalistic and authentic sounding and you sweep the reader along with the narrative. Your characters are easy to identify with and seem like people, on the whole, that we would like to know. Well done.
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reply by the author on 18-Jun-2023
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You write really well. Your dialogue is naturalistic and authentic sounding and you sweep the reader along with the narrative. Your characters are easy to identify with and seem like people, on the whole, that we would like to know. Well done.
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Comment Written 18-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2023
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Thank you for the encouragement. I appreciate it.