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Guided by Faith

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Can faith guide our path?

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Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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Good work as always. I feel I could have been in the room listening. Completely believable and real. You are right good picture. I hope you have a wonderful time with your family this weekend. Be safe, be careful, I Will pray for your safe return. Can't hurt.
Karen

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
    Thank you for the kind review.
reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 10-Sep-2023
    U are welcome. drive careful.
    Karen
Comment from Douglas Goff
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This was a fun chapter. I wish my dog would carry me treats. Heck, I wish my kids would. HA!!!

There is a great relationship developing between the two.
Douglas


 Comment Written 10-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
    Thank you for the kind review. My mom has a German Shepherd. Charlie can do amazing things. Ace is tailored after him. She also has a Yorkie, that's a pain, maybe like Molly.
reply by Douglas Goff on 10-Sep-2023
    Ah. Makes sense.
Comment from Ulla
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Hi Barbara, not to worry we will be here once you're back.
Now she wants to paint! Is she always looking for trouble? Well, not that painting should get her into much trouble, really. But you never know. Ulla xcx

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
    Thank you for the kind review. I can promise no painting will get done. Life gets in the way.
Comment from damommy
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Two things I'm wishing. That these two come to their senses and declare the love for each other, and to find out who the stalker is.

- Sorry buddy, your service[s]

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
    Thank you for the kind review and the catch. I made the correction. I can promise by the end of the novel both of these will happen.
reply by damommy on 10-Sep-2023
    Oh, good. Thanks.
Comment from judiverse
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I hope Emma will delay the painting. That'll just create another situation where she'll need rescuing. Please, have her defer it. If she has the paint, there'll be no stopping her. Having a guard dog is just another of her impulses. She would just spoil it. I'm wondering what happened to her projects for the reading students during the summer. Great work with dialogue and characters. I hope progress will be made on catching the stalker. Have a great visit with your granddaughters. judi

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
    Spoiler alert, she never gets to it in this novel. LOL Her reading projects are still on and the next one will be soon. Not the next post, but the following one. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from BethShelby
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This is another interesting story. Seth ane Emma still aren't admitting they are anything other than friends, but they keep doing nice thing for each other. She like to make him his favorite treats and he give he tulips and always wants his dog ot guard her. Enjoy your time with your granddaughter.

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
    Seth and Emma are being very stubborn about their feeling for each other. I can promise it won't be long before they start to admit, at least something. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Barry Penfold
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A really nice put together and the conversations are very real and flow well. Thanks for the notes and I hope you have a great day.Take care and keep posting.
Regards
Barry Penfold.

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 Comment Written 10-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
    Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.
Comment from JSD
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A fascinating piece of writing, most notable for your excellent dialogue throughout. You have a really effective turn of phrase that makes your characters' speech so authentic. Well done.

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 Comment Written 10-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
    Thank you for the encouragement.