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Patch and Ruby

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Patch is Helen's cat and Ruby is Kenzie's cat

45 total reviews 
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
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How fun is this verse?

I love the whimsy and airiness, frankly it just made me smile:)

Do they really wear clothes?

Moving can be traumatic time for anyone, I guess cats feel it too.

Thanks for sharing, Debi.


 Comment Written 11-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
    Hi there Kitty, (speaking of kitties, LOL). I thank you so very much for your fun comments for this silly poem. Helen's posts have been such a hoot about Patch, so when Kenzie decided to move she told me that Ruby was acting strange about it, I had to have some fun with it. Weird, but after a while, it starts to feel real. LOL... In answer to your question if they wear clothes, my comment about Patch was just a figure of speech and Ruby had a dress on for the picture only, as it was Kenzie's Christmas card. Hehe!
Comment from Wendy G
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Very well done. Original and creative. Naughty cat to think of hiding the ring where it definitely won't be found. Lovely personalities of cats discussing their difficulties with humans.
Wendy

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
    Hi Wendy, It really was funny after hearing Helen write about Patch's moving difficulties, and then Kenzie says that she senses Ruby knows she's getting ready to move, so It made complete sense to me. Thanks so much for your fun comments.
Comment from aryr
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I loved the picture of Patch and Ruby, Debi. There is a tale to tell about those two kitties. Kenzie told most of the tale and she told it well. The two kitty cats will do fine. Blessings n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
    Hi again Ali, It really was funny after hearing Helen write about Patch's moving difficulties, and then Kenzie says that she senses Ruby knows she's getting ready to move, so It made complete sense to me. Thanks so much for your fun comments
reply by aryr on 12-Sep-2023
    You are so welcome, Debi.
Comment from jim vecchio
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Look, we all know you have talking cats. No need to hide it any more! And please don't blame it on poor innocent whateveryouspellit! Some day I'm joining "Animal Crackers" just to ensure the right of those cats!

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
    Hahaha Jim, you crack me up. Actually doesn't everyone talk to their cats and have their cats talk back. Lol... but seriously ..It really was funny after hearing Helen write about Patch's moving difficulties, and then Kenzie says that she senses Ruby knows she's getting ready to move, so It made complete sense to me. Thanks so much for your fun comments
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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Putting yourself in the minds of two cats reminds me when I had my golf ball speak - sort of
I suspect Kenzi has a cat if her own? ð???
Be well
Nice to hVe you active again
East coast Tom - a moniker given to me by another FStorian though I don't recollect who.

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
    Tom, hey someone has to speak for those critters. Lol..It really was funny after hearing Helen write about Patch's moving difficulties, and then Kenzie says that she senses Ruby knows she's getting ready to move, so It made complete sense to me. Thanks so much for your fun comments
Comment from Sally Law
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Debi dear,
This is adorable of the plotting cat friends. Cats conspire, this I know. I had Twin Catzillas, they drove my mom to fright. A delightful read and outrageously illustrated. Helen must love this.
Sending you my best today as always and blessings for your writing day.
Love, Sal XOs

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
    Sally. It really was funny after hearing Helen write about Patch's moving difficulties, and then Kenzie says that she senses Ruby knows she's getting ready to move, so It made complete sense to me. Thanks so much for your fun comments
Comment from GWHARGIS
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These cats are very smart. Almost too smart. I wonder if they can hack into the internet or Fanstory. I'm thinking about Wayne and Wanda. Lol. This was very cute. Thanks for sharing this fun and imaginative story in a poem. Gretchen

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
    Gretchen, It really was funny after hearing Helen write about Patch's moving difficulties, and then Kenzie says that she senses Ruby knows she's getting ready to move, so It made complete sense to me. Thanks so much for your fun comments
Comment from nomi338
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Cats can be quite devious, bold and daring. My cat Cheddar knows that he must not venture into the backyard that he once had full command of. My grand daughter and her husband, who now live with me, have two pits, and they, would love to get hold of Cheddar. He will watch them and when their attention is diverted he will sneak in behind them and find refuge in a nearby tree which absolutely drives them wild. He has developed a fondness for this little life endangering activity.

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
    Hi there Nomi, I knew you loved cats and were a bit of a cat daddy yourself, but didn't know that you had dogs now with your granddaughter living with you. That is really cool that they get along now.

    I thank you so very much for your fun comments for this silly poem. Helen's posts have been such a hoot about Patch, so when Kenzie decided to move she told me that Ruby was acting strange about it, I had to have some fun with it. Weird, but after a while, it starts to feel real. LOL
    Thanks again, my dear BBB
Comment from jmdg1954
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What are those two notorious cats up to? Planning, plotting, zooming,, what's next, texting?
You got me smiling Debi with this post. Something I needed today... thank you so much.

Cheers to the felines...
John

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
    Hey John, that is my mission daily, to make you smile. Lol.

    I thank you so very much for your fun comments for this silly poem. Helen's posts have been such a hoot about Patch, so when Kenzie decided to move she told me that Ruby was acting strange about it, I had to have some fun with it. Weird, but after a while, it starts to feel real. LOL
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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So clever you are with this exchange of cat advice, one thing I would add to the plot make your balcony kitty proof you know what happened to my curious boy...

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
    Iza, did you realize that Patch was Helen's cat that I am writing about? I couldn't believe it when my granddaughter who does my art here said her cat was acting like it knew it was going to move. And I said that darn Patch did that. Lol... Oh Sweetie, you are so very kind and I thank you for the awesome review and comments, as well as the gracious six stars for this poem. It is all very much appreciated.
reply by Iza Deleanu on 13-Sep-2023
    Yup, I know:) but I was thinking you are planning one too:)