Comment from Paul McFarland

Excellent

Okay, Barb. We're finally getting somewhere. Now don't go screwing things up, but you will probably at least one more potential problem arise.

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 Comment Written 22-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023

There are two problems going to arise and neither of them will be good. I can promise somebody being shot and a death. Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Exceptional

So romantic, I love this chapter... mmm that is what unconditional lover is about, give and expect nothing in return, protect and care without questioning. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023

Thank you for the encouragement and understanding.

Comment from damommy

Exceptional

I don't see that you've messed up. It's a great chapter. Happy things happened. Molly's better, and Seth and Emma has a "campout" together, and she even reached for his hand. Thins are looking promising.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023

Thank you for the encouragement.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I'm not sure I would feel safe sleeping on that back patio but Seth is very kind and caring with him there I expect Emma will feel very safe, I enjoyed the romantic closing words as Seth and Emma reached out to each other from their sleeping bags Barbara, another fine chapter, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 22-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023

Thank you for the kind review. They slept on the living room floor. I may have to check that and make sure it's clear. I thought once they moved the couch, it was understood.

reply by Dolly'sPoems on 22-Oct-2023

Sorry I missed that Barbara x x x