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Guided by Faith

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Can faith guide our path?

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Comment from GWHARGIS
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Another great chapter. I like the fact that Emma and Seth are now, not only falling in love but are friends who are enjoying each other's company. I'm curious as to how much more you have planned for this story line. Still wondering about what happened to Peggy. Gretchen

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2023
    Peggy will show up again, as will Ronnie. Emma's world be turned upside down in a few weeks. She'll need Seth. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Lea Tonin1
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You're absolutely right about that physical attraction is common and comes and goes but what's left when that Faith you better hope you love the person the mind the heart the soul absolutely! I think you've got a really important message here and what you've written doesn't bore me at all let's see Seth kick some butt! LOL thank you for your New years well wishes I hope that your New year's is great and that 2024 brings you all that you wish for thank you again for all your reviewing that you do and to be able to read your fine and talented chapters!

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2023
    Thank you for your understanding and the kind review.
Comment from Daylily
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For a connecting chapter, you have kept it both flowing and interesting. Seth and Emma are the kind of people anyone would like to call friends. I always look forward to the next installment, Barbara. Best wishes for 2024!

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2023
    Thank you for the understanding.
Comment from damommy
Exceptional
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Still enjoying your story. I don't mind when it's long. Thank you for the good wishes for the new year. I wish the same for you, dear lady. Looking forward to another year of your writing.

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2023
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ben Colder
Exceptional
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For the total of a month, these people have covered ground many would have given up. Stalking, killing, injury, love, disappointments, blessings, All within a month? No matter the time frame, it is a good story as always. Sending blessings your way. Happy New Year.

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2023
    If I drew it out, it would be way too long of a novel. LOL I have to solidify Seth and Emma's relationship because her world is going to be turned upside down. She'll need Seth. Thank you for the kind review.
reply by Ben Colder on 31-Dec-2023
    I understand.
Comment from BethShelby
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It looks like things are getting back to normal for Seth and Emma. They are coming to terms with the idea of dating and Emma seems to understand she had no choice but to kill a man in self-defense. Her dog is getting well and she is happy she is able to help teenagers in trouble. She will soon have a teaching job. Seth is a little concerned other guys find her attractive and will want to date her. Great story. I hope you have a wonderful New years.

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 Comment Written 31-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2023
    I'm not sure how many weeks away it is, but Emma's world will be turned upside down. She'll need to rely on Seth big time. That's why I need to solidify their relationship. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Mustang Patty
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Hi there,
I've returned to FanStory after a bit of a break.
It's good to read your work again, and I really enjoyed this chapter. It makes me want to go back and read the rest of your posts - it looks like you've done a good job of fleshing out these characters.
I enjoyed the easy conversations between the folks, and getting some of the back story in a good way without feeling like they're being 'told' in a background use of prose.
Thank you for sharing,
~MP~

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 Comment Written 31-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2023
    WELCOME!!!!!!! I have missed you and I truly hope you're here to stay. I also hope you're writing again. I've missed those posts. Thank you for the kind review, but really thank you for returning.
reply by Mustang Patty on 31-Dec-2023
    awww - THANK YOU!!!