Within My World
A little about me42 total reviews
Comment from GWHARGIS
I feel the same way you do about Fanstory and the people here. I pray for them when I pray at night. I enjoyed reading about your life even if it was a general idea. I can tell you have a good life. Gretchen
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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I feel the same way you do about Fanstory and the people here. I pray for them when I pray at night. I enjoyed reading about your life even if it was a general idea. I can tell you have a good life. Gretchen
Comment Written 11-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Hi Gretchen, I have fallen a little behind again, but I always try to catch up as I do appreciate every review that comes my way. So thank you so very much for your lovely comments for my World poem, my dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Treischel
Your world seems to be just fine. You certainly write poetry very well. I like your rhyming structure as yo had to come up with so many 'a' rhymes. The only one that was a stretch was "pity".
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2024
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Your world seems to be just fine. You certainly write poetry very well. I like your rhyming structure as yo had to come up with so many 'a' rhymes. The only one that was a stretch was "pity".
Comment Written 11-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2024
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Oooh Thank you Tom! I felt that too and it was bothering me so I changed it back where I had it in the first place of: right now I've no immunity, but won't let lupus define me. I normally act of those little feelings when it doesn't seem right, but it almost takes someone to point it out when I am trying to make a certain point, you know? Thank you very much for your feedback and for your kind comments. And thanks for a little bit of Minnesota Nice!
And if you answer back, you betcha, I will not be offended. LOL
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That is much better. I know how one can get stuck on a point like you statement on Lupis. You betcha, by gully.
Comment from Aussie
"Space, the final frontier. To go where no Debi has been before." A slight look at the real deal. More information, please. Write a short story about my life in outer space with James Kirk. ð???
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2024
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"Space, the final frontier. To go where no Debi has been before." A slight look at the real deal. More information, please. Write a short story about my life in outer space with James Kirk. ð???
Comment Written 11-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2024
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Hello my dear Kace, as always you make your review and words fun but kind. And someday I will bore you to tears with the rest of my world. However, right now I am truly honored by your review and six stars. You are such a special woman and I appreciate you so very much. Thanks again, my very dear friend. Lotsa love, Debi
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My niece has Lupus. It's dreadful watching her deteriorate. :-(
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Thankful for our faith in God.
I'm sure you agree for all you have been through.
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It has made me more reliant on the Lord. KXX
Comment from lyenochka
Aww! Thank you for writing about YOU! And I think of all the birthday poetic tributes, I like this one the best. It shows you in all your different facets and your faith shines through! Virtual six!
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Aww! Thank you for writing about YOU! And I think of all the birthday poetic tributes, I like this one the best. It shows you in all your different facets and your faith shines through! Virtual six!
Comment Written 11-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Hi Helen, I have fallen a little behind again, but I always try to catch up as I do appreciate every review that comes my way. So thank you so very much for your lovely comments for my World poem, my dear friend. Love, Debi
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Don't worry, Debi! I'm always behind! Hugs!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A lovely appraisal of your different worlds here, Debi, all adding up to one very fulfilled and motivated life. A pleasure to read. As ever, the rhyming seems effortless. Thanks for sharing. Debbie
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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A lovely appraisal of your different worlds here, Debi, all adding up to one very fulfilled and motivated life. A pleasure to read. As ever, the rhyming seems effortless. Thanks for sharing. Debbie
Comment Written 11-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Hi Debbie, I have fallen a little behind again, but I always try to catch up as I do appreciate every review that comes my way. So thank you so very much for your lovely comments for my World poem, my dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from royowen
We shouldn't let anything define. Because when we do, we are tending to put our faith in someone's opinion, or a world that doesn't exist, I am a child of
God, a peer of the realm, a son of the most high, beautifully written Debi, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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We shouldn't let anything define. Because when we do, we are tending to put our faith in someone's opinion, or a world that doesn't exist, I am a child of
God, a peer of the realm, a son of the most high, beautifully written Debi, blessings Roy
Comment Written 11-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Hi Roy, I have fallen a little behind again, but I always try to catch up as I do appreciate every review that comes my way. So thank you so very much for your lovely comments for my World poem, my dear friend. Love, Debi
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Bless you Debi.
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Debi, your poem is most heartfelt, and it is the essence of you, mom, grandma, wife and poet. I especially liked:
My friends here are like family.
(We may not be perfect, but just like family, we're here to stay.)
Well done. Good rhyming. A pleasure to read. This poem tugged on my heartstrings. Xo. M
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2024
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Hi Debi, your poem is most heartfelt, and it is the essence of you, mom, grandma, wife and poet. I especially liked:
My friends here are like family.
(We may not be perfect, but just like family, we're here to stay.)
Well done. Good rhyming. A pleasure to read. This poem tugged on my heartstrings. Xo. M
Comment Written 11-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2024
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Hey Margaret, you are so dang sweet and I cannot thank you enough for such a lovely review and words for my world. I am truly honored by them, as well as your six stars. You are such a special and beautiful SOTU and I appreciate you so very much. Thanks again, my very dear sis.
Lotsa love, Debi
Comment from Carol Clark2
Love this! I like the way you organized your poem around the different worlds where you spend your life. It's nice to read a lovely poem about you, since you write so many for others. Have a blessed rest of the week. Carol
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2024
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Love this! I like the way you organized your poem around the different worlds where you spend your life. It's nice to read a lovely poem about you, since you write so many for others. Have a blessed rest of the week. Carol
Comment Written 11-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2024
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Carol, I cannot thank you enough for such a lovely review and words for my world. I am truly honored by them, as well as your six stars. You are such a special and beautiful woman and I appreciate you so very much. Thanks again, my very dear friend. Lotsa love, Debi
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Thank you for your very kind and sweet words. Hugs! Carol
Comment from NanaGaye
As usual a well written poem. Very tricky format,would have taken a bit of working out which of course you have done to perfection. Sorry once again I have no six stars left so please accept a five star
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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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As usual a well written poem. Very tricky format,would have taken a bit of working out which of course you have done to perfection. Sorry once again I have no six stars left so please accept a five star
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Hi Nana, I have fallen a little behind again, but I always try to catch up as I do appreciate every review that comes my way. So thank you so very much for your lovely comments for my World poem, my dear friend.
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Enjoy you day: Love from Gaye
Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova
A vibrant poem reflecting a vibrant spirit. I stand (well, sit really) in awe of your ability to pour your soul so fearlessly into your words. I can see why you've earned a high rank in poetry here. Well deserved, indeed.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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A vibrant poem reflecting a vibrant spirit. I stand (well, sit really) in awe of your ability to pour your soul so fearlessly into your words. I can see why you've earned a high rank in poetry here. Well deserved, indeed.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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I cannot thank you enough for such a lovely review and words for my world poem. I am truly honored by them, as well as your six stars. You are so very kind and I appreciate you so very much. Thanks again, my dear friend.