Guided by Faith
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Comment from damommy
This was a hard chapter to get through, but it was so wondrously real. Reading of the loss of a loved one reminds me of my own, but this chapter was comforting. God does indeed understand our anger and waits for us.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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This was a hard chapter to get through, but it was so wondrously real. Reading of the loss of a loved one reminds me of my own, but this chapter was comforting. God does indeed understand our anger and waits for us.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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Yes, it was a hard chapter to write. Thank you for the understanding.
Comment from lancellot
I don't think this chapter is too long. It does what it is supposed to do. It informs the reader of Emma's feelings and how strong her support network is, plus it tackles questions of faith during hard times like death. There is the logical side and then run-away emotions.
I do continue to think Emma is babied too much, and waivers between being strong, intelligent and in her own right, a counselor to others, but then reverts to a child-like state, with those around her treating her as less than an adult.
But I do understand this is how the story has been crafted. So, it is consistent with that.
Well written chapter.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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I don't think this chapter is too long. It does what it is supposed to do. It informs the reader of Emma's feelings and how strong her support network is, plus it tackles questions of faith during hard times like death. There is the logical side and then run-away emotions.
I do continue to think Emma is babied too much, and waivers between being strong, intelligent and in her own right, a counselor to others, but then reverts to a child-like state, with those around her treating her as less than an adult.
But I do understand this is how the story has been crafted. So, it is consistent with that.
Well written chapter.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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In the next post, I think or the following one, Emma feels as if she's being treated like a child and tries to make a stand. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was very good. Grieving is individual, isn't it? I like to be left alone to think and remember. Others can't be left alone because the rawness of the wound is too much. You handled Emma's grief and anger perfectly. Gretchen
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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This was very good. Grieving is individual, isn't it? I like to be left alone to think and remember. Others can't be left alone because the rawness of the wound is too much. You handled Emma's grief and anger perfectly. Gretchen
Comment Written 04-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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Thank you for the understanding.
Comment from eliz100
This is another interesting chapter. It appears that Emma and Seth are drawn closer in this crisis. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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This is another interesting chapter. It appears that Emma and Seth are drawn closer in this crisis. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I'm sorry I can't give you another six, but this was really good. Your words, showing Emma's feelings were so true, I was angry with God and Ian, my youngest brother, when he died two months ago. I felt just like Emma. This was well written, Barbara. Very well done. Warmest hugs, Sandra xx
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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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I'm sorry I can't give you another six, but this was really good. Your words, showing Emma's feelings were so true, I was angry with God and Ian, my youngest brother, when he died two months ago. I felt just like Emma. This was well written, Barbara. Very well done. Warmest hugs, Sandra xx
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Comment Written 04-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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Thank you for the encouragement. I'm not worried about the six.
Comment from judiverse
I was thinking things were all set for a happy ending, and then the loss of Keith. You did an excellent job of showing her grief. Emma feels like she doesn't have a memory that doesn't include her father. She will realize she has people who are there to love and support her, but she takes it hard. Would Susan really say "As you know, Keith is twelve years older than me" to her daughter? She's mentioned the age difference. This is a sad time for Emma, but she's already gotten through several difficulties. She needs time to overcome the grief that's overwhelming her now. Great job with this chapter. judi
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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I was thinking things were all set for a happy ending, and then the loss of Keith. You did an excellent job of showing her grief. Emma feels like she doesn't have a memory that doesn't include her father. She will realize she has people who are there to love and support her, but she takes it hard. Would Susan really say "As you know, Keith is twelve years older than me" to her daughter? She's mentioned the age difference. This is a sad time for Emma, but she's already gotten through several difficulties. She needs time to overcome the grief that's overwhelming her now. Great job with this chapter. judi
Comment Written 04-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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Thank you for the encouragement.
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You're welcome. I know she'll be able to make it through, especially with Pastor Pat and Seth there to offer support. judi
Comment from jim vecchio
If there were 7, you'd have it! I love your themes of the family, Good's grace and availability. I also loved your themes of unconditional love abd the importance of a Christ-centered marriage. One SMALL concern:
"They were our chaperons."-should that be: "chaperones"?
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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If there were 7, you'd have it! I love your themes of the family, Good's grace and availability. I also loved your themes of unconditional love abd the importance of a Christ-centered marriage. One SMALL concern:
"They were our chaperons."-should that be: "chaperones"?
Comment Written 04-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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Thank you for the encouragement. Thank you for catch. I have made the correction.
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I can't believe it! You're the one that always teaches me how to do it better! I meant no disrespect, believe me!
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I understand, but typos do happen and often. I know better, but stuff happens. LOL
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I am so careless, but even if I edit my stuff, you always are able to show me how to do it better, for which I'm very grateful!
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You would not believe how much I edit and still find errors. I edited this numerous times and then the past two weeks edited everyday and found errors this morning as I posted. I doubt we can ever get things perfect. My published books go through 3 editors and when I read the final copy, I see find mistakes.
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tht makes me feel aq bit better. Though I still see you as my shining example!
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you're sweet
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I appreciate you very much!
Comment from Begin Again
I become almost functional after a while.
eyes met each of theirs, before he stared,
If you need to anything tonight, I'
Good morning, Barb.... I feel guilty jumping into this marvelous story so near the end, but you deliver the message perfectly. I truly enjoyed the read and definitely connected to the emotions swirling around. Well done.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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I become almost functional after a while.
eyes met each of theirs, before he stared,
If you need to anything tonight, I'
Good morning, Barb.... I feel guilty jumping into this marvelous story so near the end, but you deliver the message perfectly. I truly enjoyed the read and definitely connected to the emotions swirling around. Well done.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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Comment Written 04-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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Thank you for the encouragement.