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Guided by Faith

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Can faith guide our path?

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Comment from damommy
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Emma's having a hard time coping with her father's death. I can relate to that. Seth is such comfort and seems to know the right way to handle her and make her eat and rest when nobody else could. I suspect a wedding in coming up soon.

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
    Thank you for the kind review. Yes, Emma is luck she has Seth.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Grief through loss of a loved one can indeed reduce our appetite and in turn make us weak and tired. Seth is forever attentive and has fallen in love with Emma and I wonder if Emma feels the same way. Another fine chapter in your story here Barbara, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
    I won't be long before we find out exactly how Emma feels. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Paul McFarland
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This is a very nice chapter, Barb. It looks like we are getting closer to wedding bells. Seth's sister was a good addition to this tale. We'll probably see more of her.

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from nomi338
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I love thee characters, I love the story arc. Losing her dad had to be rough. Losing both of my parents was tough, but I managed to get through it, mainly because I had my wife and children to comfort me. I am sure that Emma will be able to get over her grief with Seth there to provide supportive love and care.

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
    I agree. I think Seth will help Emma through this. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ben Colder
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Good song for the occasion.I have done a few of these in my day, something that takes much care and choice words when ministering. Good one, Barb. I see nothing wrong with this.

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
    It was my dad's favorite song and sung at his funeral. Thank you fro the kind review.
Comment from BethShelby
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Wow! You made this feel so real I felt like I attended a funeral. I realized I haven't been to one since my husband died six years ago. I'm glae Emma is recovering. Seth is afraid they won't be able to refrain from intimacy much longer. He doesn't want her to regret anything but she isn't making it easy for him.

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
    No Emma isn't making it easy for him. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Gunner Lil
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A very enjoyable read. Lot's of emotion.
A fast read that has great dialogue that moves the story along at a good flow and pace.
Good sensory descriptions.
Thank you.

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 Comment Written 18-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Begin Again
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The ending stole my heart.....

Seth is so sweet to Emma and understands what she needs, without pushing too hard for his own feelings. It takes a good man to put his feelings o the back burner while tending to hers.
Loved it!

Smiles and hugs, Carol

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
    Thank you for the kind review. Seth is one of the best.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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This is an enjoyable read. I love your use of dialogue as it brings your characters to life while also moving the storyline along. It's natural. This easily kept my interest.

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 Comment Written 18-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
    Thank you for the kind review.