Guided by Faith
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Comment from Douglas Goff
Okay so you kept up the great writing pace and got another six.
Wow! Talk about wrapping up a lot of loose ends. I was getting concerned that so many unexplained doors were still open. Should have known you had it completely under control.
And yes, I caught one:
Thought so, bit I wanted to check. I can handle the contractors."
(But)
Tee hee.
Okay, let's see if you hold up the good writing pace with that second book on Wednesday. Can't see how with all the effort exerted here. We shall see . . .
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Okay so you kept up the great writing pace and got another six.
Wow! Talk about wrapping up a lot of loose ends. I was getting concerned that so many unexplained doors were still open. Should have known you had it completely under control.
And yes, I caught one:
Thought so, bit I wanted to check. I can handle the contractors."
(But)
Tee hee.
Okay, let's see if you hold up the good writing pace with that second book on Wednesday. Can't see how with all the effort exerted here. We shall see . . .
Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Thank you for the catch. I can't believe I did this. I'll do my best. The second book is finished, so I just keep editing and post. I'm in the process of writing another novel and doing research for an additional one before I begin writing it.
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Yeah, I usually have my books completely done before I start posting so I can edit as I post. That is why I tried the 30 day challenge. Seemed fun. And it is!
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You're excelling at it.
Comment from patcelaw
Necessary, well written, and written in such a way that it's very easy to listen to. I enjoyed listening to it very much. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. I also hope that God will bless you with all good things. Patricia .
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Necessary, well written, and written in such a way that it's very easy to listen to. I enjoyed listening to it very much. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. I also hope that God will bless you with all good things. Patricia .
Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from eliz100
This is another excellent chapter. Seth and Emma's relationship is moving along. Will there be an engagement or wedding before the book ends? I do not see any need for improvement.Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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This is another excellent chapter. Seth and Emma's relationship is moving along. Will there be an engagement or wedding before the book ends? I do not see any need for improvement.Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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I can't reveal the ending, yet. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from judiverse
I like bringing in the new dog for Emma. He seems to have adjusted quickly, though. You even brought back Peggy, bane that she is. She still wants to cause trouble for Emma and her relationship with Seth. The boys are behind bars. This episode indicates that Seth will always have police business and Emma will have to accept that. Yes, it looks like a proposal is coming up. Hopefully, Emma has grown after all the ordeals she's been through and that she won't be so quick to accept what she hears from people like Ronnie. judi
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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I like bringing in the new dog for Emma. He seems to have adjusted quickly, though. You even brought back Peggy, bane that she is. She still wants to cause trouble for Emma and her relationship with Seth. The boys are behind bars. This episode indicates that Seth will always have police business and Emma will have to accept that. Yes, it looks like a proposal is coming up. Hopefully, Emma has grown after all the ordeals she's been through and that she won't be so quick to accept what she hears from people like Ronnie. judi
Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. I'm trying to wrap up all the loose ends. LOL
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Great job with your novel, and wishing much success with it. judi
Comment from Begin Again
Even though I jumped into this story somewhere in the middle, your writing makes it easy to follow and catch up on certain situations. I like your characters and how everything isn't beat'em up (like my stories) sort of reminds me of Garth and Allie... a true love affair. Interested to find out more about the hazing. Such a devastating challenge for college kids...they forget their brains somewhere at times.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Even though I jumped into this story somewhere in the middle, your writing makes it easy to follow and catch up on certain situations. I like your characters and how everything isn't beat'em up (like my stories) sort of reminds me of Garth and Allie... a true love affair. Interested to find out more about the hazing. Such a devastating challenge for college kids...they forget their brains somewhere at times.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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% teenage males were found unconscious in an abandoned house. They're in the hospital. True love always wins. I have a feeling Dion and Gabby may find it. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
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Me too! I probably should have written more about them but with her being pregnant, I felt it was too soon. I guess that's why Isabella ended up with her husband... that's where my heart was at the moment when I decided the ending.
I'm writing a crime one now but I promises to get back to Garth...
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I hope so.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Not sure rushing into a wedding is the way forward, Seth has been attentive, and Emma has appreciated the support, but marriage is a whole different ball game. We are enjoying these chapters Barbara, it seems a pity to end the story, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Not sure rushing into a wedding is the way forward, Seth has been attentive, and Emma has appreciated the support, but marriage is a whole different ball game. We are enjoying these chapters Barbara, it seems a pity to end the story, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. I'm going to miss these two, when the story ends.
Comment from lancellot
This chapter does feel like you are bringing the loose strands together and wrapping things up for the ending in a one or two chapters. You have your declarations of love, and delt with two (sort of) bad guys.
Good luck with the full conclusion.
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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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This chapter does feel like you are bringing the loose strands together and wrapping things up for the ending in a one or two chapters. You have your declarations of love, and delt with two (sort of) bad guys.
Good luck with the full conclusion.
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Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Still winding things up. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from BethShelby
Yes, I think those two are about ready for a wedding. They're having trouble saying aways for each other and worried about being together after a kiss. LOL It seems some of the loose ends are being taken care of like a big dog for Emma, Peggy and Ronnie. Nicely written and fun to read.
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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Yes, I think those two are about ready for a wedding. They're having trouble saying aways for each other and worried about being together after a kiss. LOL It seems some of the loose ends are being taken care of like a big dog for Emma, Peggy and Ronnie. Nicely written and fun to read.
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Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from jim vecchio
Post as many chapters as you want! I'll be there! You make the art of continuing chapters seem easy. I can always learn from your writings. I want to learn more of what the girls say and the hazing incidents. You always leave us wanting more!
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Post as many chapters as you want! I'll be there! You make the art of continuing chapters seem easy. I can always learn from your writings. I want to learn more of what the girls say and the hazing incidents. You always leave us wanting more!
Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. I appreciate the encouragement.
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Your writing encourages me to do better.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, it's a great chapter and I can already hear the wedding bells. I certainly hope it's not something I've misheard. It's a lovely story and you do write it so very well. Hugs, Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Hi Barbara, it's a great chapter and I can already hear the wedding bells. I certainly hope it's not something I've misheard. It's a lovely story and you do write it so very well. Hugs, Ulla xcx
Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.