If you were God..
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Comment from harmony13
The author's words are thought provoking, strong, clear and creative.
I pondered on these words and know in my heart that God would
always want us no matter what! The author's notes explain God's
love well - I love the quotes the author chose! This poem is a great reminder of God's love for us. Great Poem, Roy! Happy New year! Maria
The author's words are thought provoking, strong, clear and creative.
I pondered on these words and know in my heart that God would
always want us no matter what! The author's notes explain God's
love well - I love the quotes the author chose! This poem is a great reminder of God's love for us. Great Poem, Roy! Happy New year! Maria
Comment Written 04-Jan-2025
Comment from RJ Heritage
Easier said than done. We all received the gift of unconditional love through Christ, even if some of us don't recognize it for what it really is. Thank you for reminding us of this great gift from God.
Hope you're having a have a blessed day.
RJ
Easier said than done. We all received the gift of unconditional love through Christ, even if some of us don't recognize it for what it really is. Thank you for reminding us of this great gift from God.
Hope you're having a have a blessed day.
RJ
Comment Written 04-Jan-2025
Comment from Mintybee
This brings forward many issues that divide us. The question you keep coming back to forces self-examination. The verses included in the author's note fit the topic and theme well.
Mintybee
This brings forward many issues that divide us. The question you keep coming back to forces self-examination. The verses included in the author's note fit the topic and theme well.
Mintybee
Comment Written 04-Jan-2025
Comment from Nicki.B
Welcome back Roy!
There was definitely a gapping hole without your great work going up regularly!
This is just wonderful, no matter who we are no matter how rich or poor , good or bad we all deserve to be loved. A beautiful poem of hope for the years start.
Well done, I'm glad the pen is once again in motion!
Best Wishes
Nicki
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
Welcome back Roy!
There was definitely a gapping hole without your great work going up regularly!
This is just wonderful, no matter who we are no matter how rich or poor , good or bad we all deserve to be loved. A beautiful poem of hope for the years start.
Well done, I'm glad the pen is once again in motion!
Best Wishes
Nicki
Comment Written 04-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
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Thanks Nicki, for these terrific comments and great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Janet Foor
Unconditional love is rare commodity especially today. You pose an interesting question in your thought provoking poem.
Blessings and Happy new year.
Janet
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
Unconditional love is rare commodity especially today. You pose an interesting question in your thought provoking poem.
Blessings and Happy new year.
Janet
Comment Written 04-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
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Thanks Janet, for these excellent comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Samantha Wymer
That is the most powerful love that the father has for us. We are all sinners saved by God's grace because he is merciful and loving. Beautiful poem. I hope you had a good new years
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
That is the most powerful love that the father has for us. We are all sinners saved by God's grace because he is merciful and loving. Beautiful poem. I hope you had a good new years
Comment Written 04-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
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Thanks Sam, for these fantastic comments and wonderful review and shiny staes, blessings Roy
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
That's the message needed in the world today more than any other. The division is so extreme and it includes so many things. Beautifully said and I like the format of this poem as well. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
That's the message needed in the world today more than any other. The division is so extreme and it includes so many things. Beautifully said and I like the format of this poem as well. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
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Thanks Marilyn for these terrific comments and wonderful review, blessings Roy
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
That's the message needed in the world today more than any other. The division is so extreme and it includes so many things. Beautifully said and I like the format of this poem as well. Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
That's the message needed in the world today more than any other. The division is so extreme and it includes so many things. Beautifully said and I like the format of this poem as well. Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 04-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
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Thanks Marilyn, for these excellent comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from patcelaw
This is very well written and I very much enjoyed listening to it. I wish you the very best with all of your writing this year and may God bless you and give you a very good year. Patricia.
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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
This is very well written and I very much enjoyed listening to it. I wish you the very best with all of your writing this year and may God bless you and give you a very good year. Patricia.
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Comment Written 04-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
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Thanks Pat, for these excellent comments and review, blessings Roy