Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Aspirations"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from jwlee211
I enjoyed this poem. You sum up life with one you care for very deeply. Great descriptions and the conflict and no peace is so true. Great read
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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I enjoyed this poem. You sum up life with one you care for very deeply. Great descriptions and the conflict and no peace is so true. Great read
Comment Written 01-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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thank you for the review Jw
Comment from NadiaScrieva
Interesting little group of questionings here. I enjoyed how you left everything so open ended and allowed the reader's mind to simply wander to all possibilities.
Best,
Nadia
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2010
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Interesting little group of questionings here. I enjoyed how you left everything so open ended and allowed the reader's mind to simply wander to all possibilities.
Best,
Nadia
Comment Written 30-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2010
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thank you Nadia for the review
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
Peace is something we all must find. It is very difficult, at least for me it was, but without it we can drive ourselves crazy.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2010
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Peace is something we all must find. It is very difficult, at least for me it was, but without it we can drive ourselves crazy.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2010
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thank you for the review and comments
Comment from Chuck23
I have read quite a few of your poems over the last month, and what I enjoy most about all of them, including this one is your philosophy!
Thank you for sharing your poetry!
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2010
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I have read quite a few of your poems over the last month, and what I enjoy most about all of them, including this one is your philosophy!
Thank you for sharing your poetry!
Comment Written 19-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2010
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thank you for reading Chuck
Comment from honeytree
We all have our human journey. God knows this person as God knows us all. God can only decide which way our lives will go and when we die.
How we acheive our aspirations is decided by the person involved and God.
Great Writing
Honeytree.
reply by the author on 16-May-2010
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We all have our human journey. God knows this person as God knows us all. God can only decide which way our lives will go and when we die.
How we acheive our aspirations is decided by the person involved and God.
Great Writing
Honeytree.
Comment Written 16-May-2010
reply by the author on 16-May-2010
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thank you honey
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Glad you liked the review deepwater. I enjoyed reading.
Honeytree.
Comment from Aussie
A wonderful photograph; I enjoyed your poem about aspirations. Could you write a little about the photograph? Obviously a family portrait, perhaps of yourself and child? Authors notes do help us understand your writing. A lot of unanswered questions as to how the man would live the rest of his life. I am still wondering.
reply by the author on 16-May-2010
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A wonderful photograph; I enjoyed your poem about aspirations. Could you write a little about the photograph? Obviously a family portrait, perhaps of yourself and child? Authors notes do help us understand your writing. A lot of unanswered questions as to how the man would live the rest of his life. I am still wondering.
Comment Written 16-May-2010
reply by the author on 16-May-2010
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aussie that was my father in 1946 with my sister in jersey he was on subs during the war, he lived to 86 in london England
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Good to have memories; lovely photo. I am about to post a story on the war in the Pacific. Cheers,Kay.
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thanks Kay
Comment from Hitcher
Or live under the premise of whatever happens he will continue his journey with the conflict of never finding peace.
I enjoyed your 'Aspirations' above being my favorite part of your poem Deepwater, to never find peace! Now that would be a hard road to travel friend.
reply by the author on 16-May-2010
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Or live under the premise of whatever happens he will continue his journey with the conflict of never finding peace.
I enjoyed your 'Aspirations' above being my favorite part of your poem Deepwater, to never find peace! Now that would be a hard road to travel friend.
Comment Written 15-May-2010
reply by the author on 16-May-2010
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thank you Hitcher it would be
Comment from prophetess
Excellently written poem, congrats on reaching all time best status. It's well deserved. I love the image you chose for this piece, it not only frames it perfectly it also makes the message stronger and delivers more impact.
Prophetess
reply by the author on 16-May-2010
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Excellently written poem, congrats on reaching all time best status. It's well deserved. I love the image you chose for this piece, it not only frames it perfectly it also makes the message stronger and delivers more impact.
Prophetess
Comment Written 15-May-2010
reply by the author on 16-May-2010
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thank you prophetess
Comment from FredCollingwood
Deepwater writes deep poetry. I like it all, particularly:
Would he stand as stone on principles
Or bend to the ever moving passage of age
Excellent!
reply by the author on 16-May-2010
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Deepwater writes deep poetry. I like it all, particularly:
Would he stand as stone on principles
Or bend to the ever moving passage of age
Excellent!
Comment Written 15-May-2010
reply by the author on 16-May-2010
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thank you for reading Fred GW
Comment from mermaids
Life is a journey and what happens, will happen. Your words are written eloquently and have much meaning in them.
Most of us can relate to what you are saying here.
reply by the author on 16-May-2010
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Life is a journey and what happens, will happen. Your words are written eloquently and have much meaning in them.
Most of us can relate to what you are saying here.
Comment Written 15-May-2010
reply by the author on 16-May-2010
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thank you for reading mermaid and understanding the words