Healing Grief
some things lost can never be retrieved60 total reviews
Comment from jason456
What an emotional and beautifully written poem. Your words and feelings, and pain are felt by the reader intently. Patti :)
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2010
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What an emotional and beautifully written poem. Your words and feelings, and pain are felt by the reader intently. Patti :)
Comment Written 08-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2010
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jason456, thank you so very much for stopping by to read and review my poem. I appreciate your time and attention. again thank you..jlsavell
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It was my pleasure. Patti :)
Comment from Judian James
Oh Jimi, I'm so sorry for your loss. This would have been an excellent entry in the "Faith" contest. Your pacing was very effective with your little prayers coming in and out throughout the piece. The ending was so poignantly rendered. I'm assuming this is true. An excellent poem.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2010
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Oh Jimi, I'm so sorry for your loss. This would have been an excellent entry in the "Faith" contest. Your pacing was very effective with your little prayers coming in and out throughout the piece. The ending was so poignantly rendered. I'm assuming this is true. An excellent poem.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2010
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Judian, I apologize for just responding to this review. Once again thank you so very much for stopping by. Yes very true..I usually do not write or post such personal pieces, but seem to be doing a lot as of late..again thank you so very very much..jimi
Comment from mtngalofnc
Hi jlsavell,
The artwork certainly grabs one's attention and your beautifully written poem a perfect depiction of heartfelt grief of one who has lost the love of their life. I especially liked the prayer within the verses. Thank you for sharing.
Becky
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2010
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Hi jlsavell,
The artwork certainly grabs one's attention and your beautifully written poem a perfect depiction of heartfelt grief of one who has lost the love of their life. I especially liked the prayer within the verses. Thank you for sharing.
Becky
Comment Written 08-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2010
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Becky, once again I thank you from the depth of my heart for always stopping by my part of the woods and reading my work. I so appreciate you..jimi
Comment from RADIO
Beautifully written and as you said
some things lost can never be retrieved.
There is a saying I read once that maybe
you never get over this loss of a loved
one, that in time you find a way of carrying
it as gently as possible. You are a pure
and very talented poet.
Radio
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2010
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Beautifully written and as you said
some things lost can never be retrieved.
There is a saying I read once that maybe
you never get over this loss of a loved
one, that in time you find a way of carrying
it as gently as possible. You are a pure
and very talented poet.
Radio
Comment Written 08-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2010
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Radio, I am truly moved and humbled by your exceptional review. I never expected my poem to get such a moving response. I accept your compliment graciously. again thank you so very much..I am always thrilled when you drop in for a visit. I apologize for responding so late..again RADIO, thank you so very very much..jlsavell
Comment from daniela.albu
This is a good poem mourning the loss of the beloved one. The fact that he died being no longer here is revealed in the end as a sad element of surprise.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2010
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This is a good poem mourning the loss of the beloved one. The fact that he died being no longer here is revealed in the end as a sad element of surprise.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2010
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daniela.alba, oh goodness I am so behind on answering reviews. Once again you have stopped by. I am so very honored. I will have to take a tour to your portfolio..again thank you..jlsavell
Comment from Leigh Ann
So beautiful. The emotion of this piece brought tears to my eyes. I have experienced this over the past 10 years. I feel every pain in this poem. Great writing. Leigh Ann
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2010
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So beautiful. The emotion of this piece brought tears to my eyes. I have experienced this over the past 10 years. I feel every pain in this poem. Great writing. Leigh Ann
Comment Written 08-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2010
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Leigh Ann, thank you so very much for stopping by to read and review my poem on grief. I apologize for the tardiness in responding. again thank you..I appreciate your time and your wonderful comments.. jlsavell
Comment from rmdelta
Jimi,
a very strong and emotional writing, dear friend. Excellent descriptives provide us vivid imagery and create a smooth flowing poem.
I have to admit the sudden appearance of another man startled me a bit. Was the other man intended to signify your character had moved on? I have such difficulty understanding most poems. HOpefully you'll be kind enough to overlook a dumb question from me, every now and again.
Well done, Jimi
Reggie
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2010
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Jimi,
a very strong and emotional writing, dear friend. Excellent descriptives provide us vivid imagery and create a smooth flowing poem.
I have to admit the sudden appearance of another man startled me a bit. Was the other man intended to signify your character had moved on? I have such difficulty understanding most poems. HOpefully you'll be kind enough to overlook a dumb question from me, every now and again.
Well done, Jimi
Reggie
Comment Written 08-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2010
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Reggie, thank you so very much..I apologize for just responding. Have not been on the site as much as I use to.How are you..I do hope you are well..again thank you my friend..jimi
Comment from Kentucky Sweet Pea
Wow! What a poignant, moving write you've shared with us about the death of a lover. You don't know how that feels until you have to go through it, I suppose, and Lord, is this is true, where was I? I should have been here for you.
Love, peace and grace~
Pea
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2010
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Wow! What a poignant, moving write you've shared with us about the death of a lover. You don't know how that feels until you have to go through it, I suppose, and Lord, is this is true, where was I? I should have been here for you.
Love, peace and grace~
Pea
Comment Written 08-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2010
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Sweet Pea, first of all I must apologize for just responding to this exceptional review. I have not meant to be rude and unappreciative. I have just been so very busy. thank you so much. A six coming from a magnificent and prolific poet as you makes me feel on top of the world. This poem is drawn from a true experience, but many many years ago, a lifetime ago it seems. again thank you..jlsavell.
Comment from laren
This is a sad poem which tell us about feelings of abandon,
then, how time heal the pain and a leave a rose to honored the past love. A wise attitud to rescue the best of something that now is in the past.
Congratulations!
Laren
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2010
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This is a sad poem which tell us about feelings of abandon,
then, how time heal the pain and a leave a rose to honored the past love. A wise attitud to rescue the best of something that now is in the past.
Congratulations!
Laren
Comment Written 08-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2010
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laren, thank you so very much for stopping by to read and review my poetic endeavors. I apologize for just responding so late..again thank you..jlsavell
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Thank you for sharing,
Laren
Comment from marcellawachtel
I know that pain, too. Your grief comes through with painful clarity. You describe your missing him and needing him with great skill.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2010
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I know that pain, too. Your grief comes through with painful clarity. You describe your missing him and needing him with great skill.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2010
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marcellawachtel, thank you once again for stopping by to read and review my poetic endeavors. I apologize for the late response. again thank you,so very very much..jlsavell