The Lonesome Pines of Mt. Teewinot
Fighting for survival in the Tetons32 total reviews
Comment from Ailo
Oh no, I think I just got beat out for this contest. I really like your story, crossed paths with it by luck, I suppose. It is very well written, and I love how you developed the story between man and best friend, dog. I would expect to read this in one of my Anthologies at school. Nice work! Good luck with the contest :)
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2010
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Oh no, I think I just got beat out for this contest. I really like your story, crossed paths with it by luck, I suppose. It is very well written, and I love how you developed the story between man and best friend, dog. I would expect to read this in one of my Anthologies at school. Nice work! Good luck with the contest :)
Comment Written 20-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2010
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Hi Ailo! Don't feel that way, you will do great! And I thank you so much for this kind and very encouraging review! My best to you too!!
Comment from dportwood
Good luck in the Playing with a Topic contest.
A truly enjoyable and interesting story written without the encumbrance of spag and bad wording. Fast moving and believable with narrative and dialogue (to the dog) to match. Well done.
Duane
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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2010
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Good luck in the Playing with a Topic contest.
A truly enjoyable and interesting story written without the encumbrance of spag and bad wording. Fast moving and believable with narrative and dialogue (to the dog) to match. Well done.
Duane
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2010
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Thank you Duane! I am thrilled to have you like this! And I appreciate having you take time for me!! Thank you again!!