Sories Poetically Speaking
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Disclosure"A complete story in written as a poem.
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Comment from honeytree
Great art work and the words were written so well. What a secret to discover.
It was very important to know.
Honey tree
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2010
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Great art work and the words were written so well. What a secret to discover.
It was very important to know.
Honey tree
Comment Written 27-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2010
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Thank you so much for the review and the nice comments.
Beth
Comment from Charlene0513
To Beth Shelby,
A awful compelling and life changing story that you have chosen to tell in a poem.
The truth is the better way to go but it sometimes has with it bitter consequences.
Thought-provoking, to say the least.
Charlene
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2010
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To Beth Shelby,
A awful compelling and life changing story that you have chosen to tell in a poem.
The truth is the better way to go but it sometimes has with it bitter consequences.
Thought-provoking, to say the least.
Charlene
Comment Written 27-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2010
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Thank you Charlene. I appreciate the review and the nice comments.
Beth
Comment from amada
Very good use of all the assigned words to the contest. A very touching story as well, it drew sympathy on me. I wish you do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2010
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Very good use of all the assigned words to the contest. A very touching story as well, it drew sympathy on me. I wish you do well in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2010
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Thank you Amada, I really appreciate the review and nice comments.
Beth
Comment from Ghosterb
This was a very interesting and wonderful read my friend!
I loved your wording and the rhyming scheme.
Your structure and flow are perfect.
Very well done Poet!
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2010
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This was a very interesting and wonderful read my friend!
I loved your wording and the rhyming scheme.
Your structure and flow are perfect.
Very well done Poet!
Comment Written 27-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2010
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Thank you so much for the review and nice comments. I'm glad you found it interesting.
Beth
Comment from Gungalo
Ahhh what a great write using those words, poet. Your quatrains sing in a beautiful melody. Wonderful use of language here to set it apart and create great reader appeal.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2010
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Ahhh what a great write using those words, poet. Your quatrains sing in a beautiful melody. Wonderful use of language here to set it apart and create great reader appeal.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2010
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Thank you so much for the review and great comments. They are much appreciated.
Beth
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My pleasure Beth!!!
Comment from Matoshka
This was just a perfect poem that flowed and rhymed and had its own melody. I loved the story that you told about the lie that would tear her apart. this was just so good to me and it touched my heart. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2010
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This was just a perfect poem that flowed and rhymed and had its own melody. I loved the story that you told about the lie that would tear her apart. this was just so good to me and it touched my heart. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2010
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Thank you so much for the review and the nice comments. I'm so glad you liked it.
Beth
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Your so welcome Beth, it was beautiful. Blessings.
Comment from katfoxvan
BethShelby~
Great storytelling in this poem. I hope you'll write a follow up poem for this as you've put my imagination into full gear wondering what's in the box beneath the bed. Very well done!
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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2010
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BethShelby~
Great storytelling in this poem. I hope you'll write a follow up poem for this as you've put my imagination into full gear wondering what's in the box beneath the bed. Very well done!
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Comment Written 27-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2010
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Thank you so much for the review and comments. I hadn't thought about a followup but maybe I will. It would be the truth about who he really is but I guess that could be in a follow up.
Beth