Another Pretty Face
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Comment from Jonez08
Very nice conversation between the two, and Joe has such good taste, chocolate covered strawberries/lobster..wow. Sara would be crazy to let him go, which I don't think she will. And he definitely has the patience to endure anything and will take care of her and Cassie. Nice collection of books for your Task Force series. Praying you're well soon.
The distance won't stop me treating you (....)"
--since Sara interrupted, it would be the em dash here (--)
the ellipses.... would mean his voice trailed of
Cassandra
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2011
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Very nice conversation between the two, and Joe has such good taste, chocolate covered strawberries/lobster..wow. Sara would be crazy to let him go, which I don't think she will. And he definitely has the patience to endure anything and will take care of her and Cassie. Nice collection of books for your Task Force series. Praying you're well soon.
The distance won't stop me treating you (....)"
--since Sara interrupted, it would be the em dash here (--)
the ellipses.... would mean his voice trailed of
Cassandra
Comment Written 17-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2011
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I thought I had taken care of that. Maybe I forgot to save it. Thank you for your eagle eye.
Comment from jadapenn
Hi Girlfriend, a nice chapter with lots of interaction between them. Hopefully Sara will feel more secure now Joe has answered her questions from every angle. Must see this living 500 miles apart though. She is going to pack up and go with him. lol.
Well done. luv jada
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2011
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Hi Girlfriend, a nice chapter with lots of interaction between them. Hopefully Sara will feel more secure now Joe has answered her questions from every angle. Must see this living 500 miles apart though. She is going to pack up and go with him. lol.
Well done. luv jada
Comment Written 17-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2011
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Joe has a plan for solving the 500 miles problem. We just need to see if Sara will go for it. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from bowls
I'll be thinking of you and hoping you regain your strength quickly. Thanks for another lovely chapter and for the delicious picnic. You've made my mouth water. I can't wait for the last 29 pages. I'm really looking forward to them.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2011
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I'll be thinking of you and hoping you regain your strength quickly. Thanks for another lovely chapter and for the delicious picnic. You've made my mouth water. I can't wait for the last 29 pages. I'm really looking forward to them.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and continued support.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
I think she should grab the chance
of happiness with both hands, and
marry him - I hope she will.
Joe, we're completely opposite. - might I suggest..
Joe, we're complete opposites.
Another great chapter, Barbara -
Margaret.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2011
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I think she should grab the chance
of happiness with both hands, and
marry him - I hope she will.
Joe, we're completely opposite. - might I suggest..
Joe, we're complete opposites.
Another great chapter, Barbara -
Margaret.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2011
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Thank you for suggestions that change. I like it and have made the change.
Comment from bookishfabler
You are doing something right, I saw no nits or spags. Perhaps you found and fixed them already. Great job. so sweet and goopy, like chocolate covered strawberries. LOL. Hope you feel better soon. Lots of green veggies. As Popeye used to say. Eat your spinach.
hugs book
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2011
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You are doing something right, I saw no nits or spags. Perhaps you found and fixed them already. Great job. so sweet and goopy, like chocolate covered strawberries. LOL. Hope you feel better soon. Lots of green veggies. As Popeye used to say. Eat your spinach.
hugs book
Comment Written 17-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review. In the research I have done on iron enriched foods it says that although spinach is loaded with iron, it also has something, I don't remember the name that stops the body from absorbing the spinach.
Comment from Juliette Chamberlain
I am glad that Sara Joe are talking through all the issues, although it seems that Sara is dwelling a little on the negatives of the situation. I suppose that comes from her past sense of rejection etc.
I saw no spags.
Keep your chin up. Iron is quite difficult to take, for me.
I hope you continue to eat well and eat plenty of subsidies.
Juliette
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2011
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I am glad that Sara Joe are talking through all the issues, although it seems that Sara is dwelling a little on the negatives of the situation. I suppose that comes from her past sense of rejection etc.
I saw no spags.
Keep your chin up. Iron is quite difficult to take, for me.
I hope you continue to eat well and eat plenty of subsidies.
Juliette
Comment Written 17-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and well wishes.
Comment from Connie P
Sara is a tough case. She's taken insecurity to a new level. I know she's just afraid; her life is predictable and she's comfortable in her world, BUT!!!!, it's a good thing Joe likes a challenge. The issues are very realistic, I've known people who have blown off relationships of great potential because of fear and insecurity.
Connie
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2011
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Sara is a tough case. She's taken insecurity to a new level. I know she's just afraid; her life is predictable and she's comfortable in her world, BUT!!!!, it's a good thing Joe likes a challenge. The issues are very realistic, I've known people who have blown off relationships of great potential because of fear and insecurity.
Connie
Comment Written 17-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2011
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So do I, so I can sort of understand Sara. I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from marym224
Impressive chapter, Barbara. You certainly know how to use imagery to the greatest effect. I am looking forward to reading those remaining 29 pages, even though I'll be sad to get to the end of this great romance story. On the personal side, I am one of the fortunate people in this world and chemo has never been a need, but I've heard enough about it, and you have my every thought, hoping that not only will it lessen its 'kick' but that it will do the required job. Thinking about you. mmxx
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Impressive chapter, Barbara. You certainly know how to use imagery to the greatest effect. I am looking forward to reading those remaining 29 pages, even though I'll be sad to get to the end of this great romance story. On the personal side, I am one of the fortunate people in this world and chemo has never been a need, but I've heard enough about it, and you have my every thought, hoping that not only will it lessen its 'kick' but that it will do the required job. Thinking about you. mmxx
Comment Written 17-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and support. Chemo is something I would not wish on my worst enemy.
Comment from N.K. Wagner
Your post looks perfect to me. Moreover, the conversation is logical, although in this situation it's my experience that it's the guy pointing out the disadvantages (a lifetime around military Special Ops). Entertaining, and a good way to wrap up the loose ends of this adventure/romance. Nancy
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2011
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Your post looks perfect to me. Moreover, the conversation is logical, although in this situation it's my experience that it's the guy pointing out the disadvantages (a lifetime around military Special Ops). Entertaining, and a good way to wrap up the loose ends of this adventure/romance. Nancy
Comment Written 17-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Matoshka
I enjoyed your story very much. The picnic, lobster, croissants and chocolate covered strawberries added to your story. Love and possible of marriage are great. Hope you get to feeling better. I enjoyed your story very much. Blessings.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2011
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I enjoyed your story very much. The picnic, lobster, croissants and chocolate covered strawberries added to your story. Love and possible of marriage are great. Hope you get to feeling better. I enjoyed your story very much. Blessings.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
