Lonely Hearts Meet
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Comment from Shirley B
Dear Barbara, This is a beautiful story you are telling. Not only that but you are helping people that might be abused themselves. You are someone's angel. I am so glad you made it through the school year. Your strength is so great. Take care, Shirley
reply by the author on 31-May-2011
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Dear Barbara, This is a beautiful story you are telling. Not only that but you are helping people that might be abused themselves. You are someone's angel. I am so glad you made it through the school year. Your strength is so great. Take care, Shirley
Comment Written 30-May-2011
reply by the author on 31-May-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and support.
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Barbara,
I got kicked off the site before I finished my review! I am glad you were able to finish the school year, somehow I knew you would. I wanted this chapter to be longer and I bet I'm not alone. I fear for Anna and Troy does to so I hope he finds her soon....well done....blessings, chey
reply by the author on 30-May-2011
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Hi Barbara,
I got kicked off the site before I finished my review! I am glad you were able to finish the school year, somehow I knew you would. I wanted this chapter to be longer and I bet I'm not alone. I fear for Anna and Troy does to so I hope he finds her soon....well done....blessings, chey
Comment Written 30-May-2011
reply by the author on 30-May-2011
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Thank you for your kind reveiw and continued support.
Comment from moyramouse
Whites' - you don't need the apostrophe here
Wasn't Troy clever at getting the information he needed from Mr Keller!!
I doubt she will be there when he eventually finds her parents, as I am sure he will. I remember her telling Paul she would never go back to her parents. I hope they find her soon.
Well done getting to the end of term! You are an amazing lady. My son worked throughout his radiotherapy and chemo - he said it got him through it because he had to concentrate on something other than what was happening to him. I hope you are feeling more comfortable. I send love and prayers. Have a rest and enjoy more time to yourself. xxxmouse
reply by the author on 30-May-2011
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Whites' - you don't need the apostrophe here
Wasn't Troy clever at getting the information he needed from Mr Keller!!
I doubt she will be there when he eventually finds her parents, as I am sure he will. I remember her telling Paul she would never go back to her parents. I hope they find her soon.
Well done getting to the end of term! You are an amazing lady. My son worked throughout his radiotherapy and chemo - he said it got him through it because he had to concentrate on something other than what was happening to him. I hope you are feeling more comfortable. I send love and prayers. Have a rest and enjoy more time to yourself. xxxmouse
Comment Written 30-May-2011
reply by the author on 30-May-2011
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It's there because somebody else told it was needed. I appreciate your kind review. I agree with your son. Work kept my mind of the cancer.
Comment from gramalot8
Barbara, onward and upward he goes to find and help her, still. You've painted a good picture of a good man in Troy. Keep writing and sharing with us.
reply by the author on 30-May-2011
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Barbara, onward and upward he goes to find and help her, still. You've painted a good picture of a good man in Troy. Keep writing and sharing with us.
Comment Written 30-May-2011
reply by the author on 30-May-2011
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Thank you for kind review.
Comment from Deejharrington
I'm happy to read that Paul is not leaving this alone. He will keep searching till he finds her. Very well done and certainly will keep me reading the story. I enjoy reading it.
deb
reply by the author on 30-May-2011
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I'm happy to read that Paul is not leaving this alone. He will keep searching till he finds her. Very well done and certainly will keep me reading the story. I enjoy reading it.
deb
Comment Written 30-May-2011
reply by the author on 30-May-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from stanishmichelle
Troy's idea worked nicely, and got the results he wanted using Anna's book. Mr. Keller spoke without being prompted too much. I'm now curious to know what will happen on the trip to Mount Erie. Good for you for making it through the school year, and have a blessed holiday.
reply by the author on 30-May-2011
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Troy's idea worked nicely, and got the results he wanted using Anna's book. Mr. Keller spoke without being prompted too much. I'm now curious to know what will happen on the trip to Mount Erie. Good for you for making it through the school year, and have a blessed holiday.
Comment Written 30-May-2011
reply by the author on 30-May-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and support.
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You're welcome.
Comment from WilliamDeen
An enjoyable read. Moved the story forward and left us hanging a little wondering what Troy might find in Mount Erie. Look forward to the next addition. Well written, good intrigue, and Troy is a good character. Thanks for sharing. billy
reply by the author on 30-May-2011
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An enjoyable read. Moved the story forward and left us hanging a little wondering what Troy might find in Mount Erie. Look forward to the next addition. Well written, good intrigue, and Troy is a good character. Thanks for sharing. billy
Comment Written 30-May-2011
reply by the author on 30-May-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and encouraging words.
Comment from Perp Ihebom
I am happy for you, dear Barbara. I appreciate the information in the author's note. I have not heard of such services as they are yet to come into effect in my part of the world. KUDOS
reply by the author on 30-May-2011
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I am happy for you, dear Barbara. I appreciate the information in the author's note. I have not heard of such services as they are yet to come into effect in my part of the world. KUDOS
Comment Written 30-May-2011
reply by the author on 30-May-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and support.
Comment from glpar
This story continues to hold my attention and leaves me wanting more. Looking forward to the next post so I can then learn more of the story.
reply by the author on 30-May-2011
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This story continues to hold my attention and leaves me wanting more. Looking forward to the next post so I can then learn more of the story.
Comment Written 30-May-2011
reply by the author on 30-May-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from teacherdub
Saga continues to hold attention. This new twist adds excitement to the storyline. Action is sequenced smoothly, and the dialogue between Troy and Anna's boss adds a strand of hope to the plot sequence. Good job. td
reply by the author on 30-May-2011
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Saga continues to hold attention. This new twist adds excitement to the storyline. Action is sequenced smoothly, and the dialogue between Troy and Anna's boss adds a strand of hope to the plot sequence. Good job. td
Comment Written 30-May-2011
reply by the author on 30-May-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and encouraging words.