Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 67 "part three, Chapter 20"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from Fluffyhead
Oh my gosh this conveys so much strong emotion I actually shed a tear a two. Something I don't do much. Love the Indian blankets references.
reply by the author on 22-May-2012
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Oh my gosh this conveys so much strong emotion I actually shed a tear a two. Something I don't do much. Love the Indian blankets references.
Comment Written 21-May-2012
reply by the author on 22-May-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Taurean Monkey
What a wonderful piece based on fact. Your extract is very well written and the reader is in the room with the other characters. I like the attention to detail within your scenes. Well done, kind regards TMonkey
reply by the author on 22-May-2012
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What a wonderful piece based on fact. Your extract is very well written and the reader is in the room with the other characters. I like the attention to detail within your scenes. Well done, kind regards TMonkey
Comment Written 21-May-2012
reply by the author on 22-May-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome, kind regards, TM
Comment from Mishelly
I'm glad you haven't rushed in bringing Anna out of her coma. In real life it's never rushed, so your pacing with the story brings a realism to it. I enjoyed this as much as the previous posts, and I can't wait to see how this is going to turn out.
reply by the author on 22-May-2012
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I'm glad you haven't rushed in bringing Anna out of her coma. In real life it's never rushed, so your pacing with the story brings a realism to it. I enjoyed this as much as the previous posts, and I can't wait to see how this is going to turn out.
Comment Written 21-May-2012
reply by the author on 22-May-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Shirley McLain
Wonderfully, happy, chapter. I'm so glad that Anna has finally woke from her coma. Now I can see what is going to happen between Troy and Anna. Great job.
reply by the author on 21-May-2012
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Wonderfully, happy, chapter. I'm so glad that Anna has finally woke from her coma. Now I can see what is going to happen between Troy and Anna. Great job.
Comment Written 21-May-2012
reply by the author on 21-May-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Munkysam
This was a very enjoyable read. I like the tenderness amongst all the worry that takes place in a hospital. I think you did a great job creating a loving family dynamic. This is the first part of this story I've seen, and even without knowing the rest I was hooked. Very nice work :)
reply by the author on 21-May-2012
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This was a very enjoyable read. I like the tenderness amongst all the worry that takes place in a hospital. I think you did a great job creating a loving family dynamic. This is the first part of this story I've seen, and even without knowing the rest I was hooked. Very nice work :)
Comment Written 21-May-2012
reply by the author on 21-May-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from rwilliam
Very good chapter. It is the first that I've read but I really enjoyed it!
Congratulations on the blue ribbon and All Time Best. Great work!
reply by the author on 21-May-2012
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Very good chapter. It is the first that I've read but I really enjoyed it!
Congratulations on the blue ribbon and All Time Best. Great work!
Comment Written 21-May-2012
reply by the author on 21-May-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from JW
In looking at the picture of the field of flowers, you can imagine how much I would love to get away, and make a carefree dash through them.
It's absolutely beautiful.
In getting back to the story now - this is another well written continuation of the chapter. Great job. JW
reply by the author on 21-May-2012
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In looking at the picture of the field of flowers, you can imagine how much I would love to get away, and make a carefree dash through them.
It's absolutely beautiful.
In getting back to the story now - this is another well written continuation of the chapter. Great job. JW
Comment Written 21-May-2012
reply by the author on 21-May-2012
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Thank you for the kind review, I would like to run through the field of flowers too.
Comment from missy98writer
Barbara,
Your praiseworthy chapter is moving and sensationally written with wonderful imagery. I'm not allowed to give this chapter a destrved six, since I'm getting a five the highest rating I can give you with this message: "You have rewarded this author a six star rating twice in the past thirty days so this rating is not available." I'm in love with Troy. He loves Anna and he adores her son like his own. I liked your end of chapter when Anna opens her eyes. I immensely enjoy your fine narrative voice, great characterization, good dialogue and excellent detailed writing. What you penned is powerful, but oh so realistic. I would recommend your latest chapter to other reviewers as a must read to other reviewers. I'm sorry I'm so behind on reviewing because on top on my CP, PPH, COPD, IB, Lymphadema on legs, feet, toes, buttocks area, vaginal area and vagina, crotch where legs and butt meet, I'm taking Cipro Antibodics that I'm allergic to just to fight celluitus, bladder infection and pain all over due to a yeast infection cause by antibodics killing off my good bacteria. I'm a mess and in constant pain right now. I hope you're feeling good. Lovely day to you, my friend. I sent you my love and prayers. Hold on to your talented hubby. Peace out...Melissa.
reply by the author on 21-May-2012
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Barbara,
Your praiseworthy chapter is moving and sensationally written with wonderful imagery. I'm not allowed to give this chapter a destrved six, since I'm getting a five the highest rating I can give you with this message: "You have rewarded this author a six star rating twice in the past thirty days so this rating is not available." I'm in love with Troy. He loves Anna and he adores her son like his own. I liked your end of chapter when Anna opens her eyes. I immensely enjoy your fine narrative voice, great characterization, good dialogue and excellent detailed writing. What you penned is powerful, but oh so realistic. I would recommend your latest chapter to other reviewers as a must read to other reviewers. I'm sorry I'm so behind on reviewing because on top on my CP, PPH, COPD, IB, Lymphadema on legs, feet, toes, buttocks area, vaginal area and vagina, crotch where legs and butt meet, I'm taking Cipro Antibodics that I'm allergic to just to fight celluitus, bladder infection and pain all over due to a yeast infection cause by antibodics killing off my good bacteria. I'm a mess and in constant pain right now. I hope you're feeling good. Lovely day to you, my friend. I sent you my love and prayers. Hold on to your talented hubby. Peace out...Melissa.
Comment Written 21-May-2012
reply by the author on 21-May-2012
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I will pray that you do some major healing.
Comment from robyn corum
An interesting chapter. I'm glad you didn't lose the mother. The indian blankets were a nice touch. I can't wait till she sees them.
reply by the author on 21-May-2012
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An interesting chapter. I'm glad you didn't lose the mother. The indian blankets were a nice touch. I can't wait till she sees them.
Comment Written 21-May-2012
reply by the author on 21-May-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from amada
Great touch in the Indian Blankets. For sure it was a great relief when Anna opened her eyes at the end. Very well written this positive act of love.
reply by the author on 21-May-2012
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Great touch in the Indian Blankets. For sure it was a great relief when Anna opened her eyes at the end. Very well written this positive act of love.
Comment Written 21-May-2012
reply by the author on 21-May-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.