Myth Gnomer
I wrote this just for pun37 total reviews
Comment from CheyLGwriter
Wow! This is a wonderful piece. The cadence is absolutely exquisite. I love the joyful flow. This is an excellent contest entry. May God Bless You in the Contest. Thanks for sharing such a wonderful poem.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2012
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Wow! This is a wonderful piece. The cadence is absolutely exquisite. I love the joyful flow. This is an excellent contest entry. May God Bless You in the Contest. Thanks for sharing such a wonderful poem.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2012
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my words. I had a great time in the writing of it.
Comment from Sherry Asbury
Delightful. I am always intrigued by the use of language in a manner not meant, playful and mischievously... Very appealing poem. Very well done!
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2012
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Delightful. I am always intrigued by the use of language in a manner not meant, playful and mischievously... Very appealing poem. Very well done!
Comment Written 13-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2012
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my words. I had a great deal of fun with this one.
Comment from dmt1967
I like this poem very much it was well written he was the guy that you put pennies on the eyes of the guys and girls that dies to pay for their trip thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2012
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I like this poem very much it was well written he was the guy that you put pennies on the eyes of the guys and girls that dies to pay for their trip thank you for sharing
Comment Written 13-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2012
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. I wasn't aware of the pennies aspect of Charon. I will read up on that.
Comment from tralls
This is awesome. Your humor mixed with ryhming pay tribute to the tale, and I give you six stars without question. I am anxious to read more of your work. Thanks for posting - I have nothing to offer in the way of critique or advice and I am something of a poet myself. Good work!!!
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2012
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This is awesome. Your humor mixed with ryhming pay tribute to the tale, and I give you six stars without question. I am anxious to read more of your work. Thanks for posting - I have nothing to offer in the way of critique or advice and I am something of a poet myself. Good work!!!
Comment Written 13-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2012
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When the contest is over, I would be honored for you to take a peek at my stuff and give me any advice you have. Thank you so much for the sixth. It makes the work seem valuable to someone besides myself. I am very flattered.
Comment from Eliza M
I might be wrong but I think I can guess who might have penned this wry and very witty piece of writing.Great style rhythm and rhyme and very clever twists on numerous occasions throughout. A great achievement and most enjoyable.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2012
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I might be wrong but I think I can guess who might have penned this wry and very witty piece of writing.Great style rhythm and rhyme and very clever twists on numerous occasions throughout. A great achievement and most enjoyable.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2012
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Well, let me know at the end of the contest if you were right. If not, I would like to read this other poet's work. Thanks for the read and review. I'm glad you enjoyed it but you couldn't have had as much fun as I did in the writing of it.
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OOOOOH! So frustrating!LOL!
Comment from tango494
Nicely constructed poem. I think the formatting was good and your art selection was perfect for your submission. I think in a few places you could have chosen to word things a bit different and the flow would have been better, just my simple option. Overall good work.
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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2012
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Nicely constructed poem. I think the formatting was good and your art selection was perfect for your submission. I think in a few places you could have chosen to word things a bit different and the flow would have been better, just my simple option. Overall good work.
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Comment Written 13-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2012
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. I'll take a look at the flow as there is always room to improve. That is why it's so hard to let a poem go.
Comment from Heaven Bound
What a clever poem. Very interesting. It is so easily readable, although I initially suspected otherwise. I gave only 2 quick comments. First, "Gods" should be "gods". Second, there are 2 different spellings of "Cheron".
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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2012
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What a clever poem. Very interesting. It is so easily readable, although I initially suspected otherwise. I gave only 2 quick comments. First, "Gods" should be "gods". Second, there are 2 different spellings of "Cheron".
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Comment Written 13-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2012
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Thank you so much for catching those two. I think I read it over so many times that I became numb. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my words.