My Really Truly Christmas Songs
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "First Christmas"A Collection of my own Compositions for Christmas
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Comment from allborn66
The color scheme makes the piece virtually unreadable, but that does seem to be mentioned in the Author's notes. I'm not anti-Christmas, but this piece just did not seem to have anything new to offer as a carol. :(
Barbara
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2013
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The color scheme makes the piece virtually unreadable, but that does seem to be mentioned in the Author's notes. I'm not anti-Christmas, but this piece just did not seem to have anything new to offer as a carol. :(
Barbara
Comment Written 06-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2013
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Sorry about that, glad you managed to get through anyway. Thanks for the review. I will look into the colour thing you are probably right on that. I only just found out how to do that today no thanks to FS for any guidance.
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Hi there I just adjusted the font colour could you let me kjow what you think now? Also did you hear the Midi I had on the Poem?
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The color is so much better :)
Barbara
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Thanks for coming back. have written to Tom and said he needs to put some instructions some place on using the Font colours in Advanced editor. Appreciate the return. Cheers.
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Not sure if I asked if you heard the music I put with it. There are others in the book I have now put them all in.
Comment from Devon Phipps
Very good. I love the way you constructed it very unique. It awakened emotions in me that I never though existed anymore. It made me feel somewhat of an internal happiness. Extremely beautiful
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2013
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Very good. I love the way you constructed it very unique. It awakened emotions in me that I never though existed anymore. It made me feel somewhat of an internal happiness. Extremely beautiful
Comment Written 06-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2013
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Thanks very much I had a complaint about the colour scheme and I did wonder if that was a bit stark. Only found out how to do the font colouring today actually from a good friend on FS. Appreciate the review.
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Hi Friend I just changed the cololur of the font I kolnow it wasn't an issue for you ubt if you have time appreciate if you could look again thanks.
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Not sure if I asked if you heard the music I put with it. There are others in the book I have now put them all in.
Comment from ragamuffin
A lovely piece that I can easily hear in song lyrics. I love to see the true "reason for the season" presented at Christmastime, which you presented both the physical, the birth of Christ, and purpose, salvation.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2013
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A lovely piece that I can easily hear in song lyrics. I love to see the true "reason for the season" presented at Christmastime, which you presented both the physical, the birth of Christ, and purpose, salvation.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2013
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AMEN! Friend did you hear the music Midi in there as well? Thanks for the great review.
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Not sure if I asked if you heard the music I put with it. There are others in the book I have now put them all in.
Comment from Eigle Rull
I enjoyed this piece very much. Your words easily describe your visions to your readers. The reader can easily understand your message. It was interesting, and it held my attention very well.
Always with respect,
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2013
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I enjoyed this piece very much. Your words easily describe your visions to your readers. The reader can easily understand your message. It was interesting, and it held my attention very well.
Always with respect,
Comment Written 06-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2013
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Hi thanks a lot hope you heard the Midi file as well. Appreciate the fine review.
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Not sure if I asked if you heard the music I put with it. There are others in the book I have now put them all in.
Comment from country ranch writer
THERE IS SO MUCH TO BE THANKFUL HERE DURING THE CHRISTMAS HOLIDAYS TO BE WITH LOVED ONES AND HOPE THOSE THAT ARE STILL FIGHTING TO KEEP US SAFE WILL FEEL OUR LOVE FOR THEM IN THE PRAYERS THAT GO OUT TO THEM AND THEIR FAMILIES
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2013
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THERE IS SO MUCH TO BE THANKFUL HERE DURING THE CHRISTMAS HOLIDAYS TO BE WITH LOVED ONES AND HOPE THOSE THAT ARE STILL FIGHTING TO KEEP US SAFE WILL FEEL OUR LOVE FOR THEM IN THE PRAYERS THAT GO OUT TO THEM AND THEIR FAMILIES
Comment Written 06-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2013
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Hi friend thanks for jumping in. hate how the media just wants to call it "Holidays" and leave off the Christmas part. Hope you heard the music and can check out the other Carols I have done thanks again.
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BLAME OBAMA FOR THAT HE DOESN'T BELIEVE IN CHRISTMAS SUCH A HYPROCRITE HE IS
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Not sure if I asked if you heard the music I put with it. There are others in the book I have now put them all in.
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my speakers are on the blitz
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Well glad we are back on deck! Say hullo to the Redneck! Did he like the pictures?
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Well glad we are back on deck! Say hullo to the Redneck! Did he like the pictures?
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yes
Comment from michaelcahill
ha! first in line. Right at the top of your game here. This flows smooth as silk. Beautifully written with an uplifting and joyful spirit. Just perfect for the season and suitable as well. The focus is right where it belongs. I enjoy the music quite a bit. Matches up quite nicely. Attention! Anyone reviewing after me. A musician has approved this. Watch your step!! hahaha. mikey
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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2013
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ha! first in line. Right at the top of your game here. This flows smooth as silk. Beautifully written with an uplifting and joyful spirit. Just perfect for the season and suitable as well. The focus is right where it belongs. I enjoy the music quite a bit. Matches up quite nicely. Attention! Anyone reviewing after me. A musician has approved this. Watch your step!! hahaha. mikey
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Comment Written 06-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2013
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Hey mate thanks for being "there" for me. Appreciate the fine review and glad you picked up the music. Need help with the font colour if anyone knows how to fix that
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should be able to go into advanced editor and highlite the whole piece and then click on the color and it should change. you can also click a different font and bold. all at the same time. takes a bit to get used to. not that user friendly. like "Word" but not as easy to figure out. mikey
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Ahh that what I am NOT DOING I don't think that was mentioned. Come back and look after I see what I can do.
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Hiu mate just fi8xed jnow I will go and do that to some of then others!! Yippeeee! Something learned today!
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Not sure if I asked if you heard the music I put with it. There are others in the book I have now put them all in.
Comment from Ben Colder
This would be beautiful in praise by groups of Carolers going place to place . Very nicely done. Well done poet.
Need this sung by all the churches.
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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2013
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This would be beautiful in praise by groups of Carolers going place to place . Very nicely done. Well done poet.
Need this sung by all the churches.
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Comment Written 06-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2013
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Thanks Ben for the great review. My pastor has taken years to do it but he wants me to fix these up to put in our hymnal at church now. I think I did get him to sing them while I played years ago have to try and find the recording. Thanks again I do hope you were able to pick up the music and there is another couple of these in my Portfolio if you wan to check them out.
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Will do. Check out my profile and come dine at the Master's table with me. My friend is in need of prayer tonight. Join with me. Blessings.
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Get to it a bit later friend.