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Lunar Legacy

Cursed celestial satellite-why do you torment me so?

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Comment from daeneam
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The only werewolf story I loved is "Silver Bullet" (where I got my pen name)... Have you seen it? I think, there are many creepy things affected by the moon. The scariest one is a human hailed to be a "lunatic".

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
    Have I seen it?! I OWN it, LOL. Anything written by Stephen King, I've seen a gazillion times. It happens to be one of my favorite werewolf tales as well.

    Thanks for sharing your thoughts with me on this one, bulletski. Much obliged!
reply by daeneam on 19-Mar-2014
    Yey! We have another thing in common. I let my children watch all my favorite movies whether it is old or new.

    God bless you and have a nice day! c", Mae
Comment from seaglass
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The graphics are splendid. I story poem very entertaining, a fun read. The author's notes were educational and I much enjoyed all of the presentation.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
    Thank you very much, seaglass. I am very glad you liked it, and I certainly appreciate the kind comments.
Comment from mountainwriter49
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Hi, Dean

I have to hand it to you, your craft in this genre is unsurpassed. This story in a poem is well written, flows well and uses words and phrases rich in imagery and emotive impact. I thoroughly enjoyed the read of it tonight.

-Ray

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014
    Thanks, Ray. I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I really appreciate your kind comments.
Comment from Darkhorse555
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amazing howling beautifully drawn tis thy brethren - soulful howling refrains cries out to the wolf, for no man remains.excellently crafted piece dear friend

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014
    Thank you, my Dark Fiend! I am truly grateful for your comments!
Comment from Ekim777
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I find little that is forbidding about the moon because surely the night time is the playground of our souls and that is where the moon reigns supreme as queen. I am very fond of bullying father, Doc. Freud. He proclaimed the importance of a sense of the uncanny and mystery yet he reduced these things to biological concepts. Still I liked his preoccupation with dreams as being the royal way to the unconscious and to where the soul resides. Perhaps I did not do your poem justice but you did set me thinking. I find macabre your symbol of the wolf. I prefer creatures of feline grace. Go with God. -Ekim777

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
    You did just fine by me, Ekim777. I appreciate your thoughtful response. We all have different likes and dislikes. We all see the world through different colored lenses. Our differences are what makes us individually unique and special. That's why our world is such an interesting place in which to live. You like butterflies cooing babies, and roses, I like monsters, mayhem, and madness. Yet, we can still hold a civilized and cordially enticing conversation.

    Ain't life grand?
Comment from Writingfundimension
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This man/beast story had me mesmerized all the way through, Dean. I'm fascinated by our persistent attachment to the myth of the moon's ability to change man to beast.

Very well done!

Warm regards, Bev

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
    Thanks, Bev, I know that you are, my friend (LOL)
    I appreciate the kind review.
reply by Writingfundimension on 16-Mar-2014
    You bet, buddy.

    Very welcome, as always.

    :0) Bev
Comment from words
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I enjoyed your intriguing verse and your detailed author's notes.

I have always like werewolf stories and you have added another layer to my enjoyment.

Beautifully done.

Hugs,d

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
    Thanks, words. Much appreciated.
Comment from Petriesan
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scary picture
this There is nothing I can do for you, your destiny's been sealed,

you no longer walk in this realm, your affliction can't be healed. is great

I really like how you stretch the boundaries oof using the editor on FS

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
    Thanks, Petriesan. Exceeding boundaries is always a good thing. Unless, of course, you're on the 38th parallel.

    Have a great day, my friend.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
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Dear Dean - pleasant screams - yeah I got that one covered :) I agree sometimes truth is scarier...though let me tell you - you scare the wits out of me with your writing most times....and then I think of the effort of your creation, the ability to weave and pull at my emotions, those triggers that bring fear up a few notches and boy I say you aced it always.....great job, smooth and dark with just the right amount of OMG and PMP to do me in....
Thanks for scaring me again.
Maureen

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
    Thanks, Maureen. I appreciate that. As far as scaring you, I will always do my best to increasingly facilitate that sensation, LOL.

    Much obliged, my friend.
Comment from emjaihammond
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Really wonderful to read, so mysterious and spooky. I love the piece as a whole and it reads so well. Your author's notes ring true. Truth is stranger than fiction. It always has been.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
    Yes, and it's often where we who write in the horror genre get the inspiration for our most terrifying stories. Thanks for an awesome review, emjaihammond. I appreciate it!