The Soldier & Amazing Grace
I took an unexpected trip to Paradise last night75 total reviews
Comment from Zue65
Oh yes, I never thought of the magnanimity of our God that way. To forgive Hitler and kiss him on the cheek is the ultimate example of mercy and forgiveness and even Hitler can't help but shout, "My God, Amazing Grace". God is happier welcoming a sinner who repents, there is much rejoicing in heaven when a lost sheep is back. Thanks for sharing this exceptional poem.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014
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Oh yes, I never thought of the magnanimity of our God that way. To forgive Hitler and kiss him on the cheek is the ultimate example of mercy and forgiveness and even Hitler can't help but shout, "My God, Amazing Grace". God is happier welcoming a sinner who repents, there is much rejoicing in heaven when a lost sheep is back. Thanks for sharing this exceptional poem.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014
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And thank you for your very kind comments and generous rating, nassus1957. As always, I truly value your opinion.
Comment from Kausar_Javeria
Wow..this is an amazing piece of poetry..I loved how you described Heaven and being a history enthusiast, I especially found the author's notes very informative..thanks for sharing this wonderful poem along with the useful info..
God Bless~!
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014
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Wow..this is an amazing piece of poetry..I loved how you described Heaven and being a history enthusiast, I especially found the author's notes very informative..thanks for sharing this wonderful poem along with the useful info..
God Bless~!
Comment Written 28-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014
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Thanks so much for reading and reviewing it for me, Kausar. I really appreciate that!
God bless you & yours as well...
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
The images and word imagery are outstanding and xomplement each other perfectly.
The subject choice is perfect, and interesting on a spiritual and literary level.
I need more sixes your amazing work is gobbling them all.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014
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The images and word imagery are outstanding and xomplement each other perfectly.
The subject choice is perfect, and interesting on a spiritual and literary level.
I need more sixes your amazing work is gobbling them all.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014
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Hah, thanks so much, seken58. Your unyeilding support has always been appreciated, my dear friend. I'm truly thankful for your readership, as well as your opinions.
Have a blessed day!
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is yet another beautiful and interesting poem that the author has created with this piece of writing. I agree with you that the Nazis didn't create anti-semitism. It has been around for millennia. We must stamp out prejudice of all kinds and treat each other like the human beings we are.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014
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This is yet another beautiful and interesting poem that the author has created with this piece of writing. I agree with you that the Nazis didn't create anti-semitism. It has been around for millennia. We must stamp out prejudice of all kinds and treat each other like the human beings we are.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014
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Thanks so much for your stellar rating and kind comments, Tomes. I'm truly glad you enjoyed the poem.
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I did indeed.
Comment from forestport12
Its interesting how things within a Christian world view shifted. I sometimes wonder if Hitler used the name of Christianity to extract his own purpose. I tend to enjoy the history in our country like Harry Truman who was taught as a lad in Sunday School that the Jews were Gods chosen people and later he was the leader who first declared statehood full filling a prophecy. There is something enchanting about how you took simple words created a colorful tapestry. It must be the rhyme scheme just has a splendid cadence.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014
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Its interesting how things within a Christian world view shifted. I sometimes wonder if Hitler used the name of Christianity to extract his own purpose. I tend to enjoy the history in our country like Harry Truman who was taught as a lad in Sunday School that the Jews were Gods chosen people and later he was the leader who first declared statehood full filling a prophecy. There is something enchanting about how you took simple words created a colorful tapestry. It must be the rhyme scheme just has a splendid cadence.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014
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Thank you so much, Stan. I am really glad to know that you enjoyed this one, my friend!
Comment from DALLAS01
Too often when people think of forgiveness they view it only in relation to themselves, or those who have smited them in some way. It is not our job to forgive, it belongs to the only one with the ultimate authority and he doesn't discriminate. Though I think maybe some of these ruthless leaders, never make it to heaven to be assessed.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014
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Too often when people think of forgiveness they view it only in relation to themselves, or those who have smited them in some way. It is not our job to forgive, it belongs to the only one with the ultimate authority and he doesn't discriminate. Though I think maybe some of these ruthless leaders, never make it to heaven to be assessed.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014
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I agree, DALLAS, and I sincerely appreciate your views on this.
Comment from ArtGal
To begin with, what a wonderful picture that you chose for this poem. I love the meaning in this, that this Nazi learned the truth of his ways, and dropped to the ground shouting out, "My God...Amazing Grace." How awesome is this??? I have to say BRAVO for this poem. And I love how you put this into a dream. You knew you still had work to do, and couldn't stay. Needless to say I love it all, every stanza from beginning to end! So very thrilled that you posted this, and will read over and over again. . .Sharon
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014
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To begin with, what a wonderful picture that you chose for this poem. I love the meaning in this, that this Nazi learned the truth of his ways, and dropped to the ground shouting out, "My God...Amazing Grace." How awesome is this??? I have to say BRAVO for this poem. And I love how you put this into a dream. You knew you still had work to do, and couldn't stay. Needless to say I love it all, every stanza from beginning to end! So very thrilled that you posted this, and will read over and over again. . .Sharon
Comment Written 27-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014
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Thanks, Sharon, what an amazing compliment you've payed me. I sincerely appreciate that, my friend. You made my week!
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And I meant every word and every star!!!
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Comment from royowen
A beautifully written and comprehensive write, displaying the amazing grace that God offers to even the worst o people! God judges us all in the same way as He would a Nazi, a communist, colour or creed! Only we, judge by degrees! I really enjoyed this fantastic write! I stand in awe of this monumentally brilliant work, Dean! You are a real talent, my friend! Blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014
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A beautifully written and comprehensive write, displaying the amazing grace that God offers to even the worst o people! God judges us all in the same way as He would a Nazi, a communist, colour or creed! Only we, judge by degrees! I really enjoyed this fantastic write! I stand in awe of this monumentally brilliant work, Dean! You are a real talent, my friend! Blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014
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Thank you so much, Roy. And I appreciate that fact that you feel I have talent, my friend, for that means more to me than anything. Oh, by the way? I think you're pretty talented yourself, lol!
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To be mentioned in the same breath, blessing indeed!
Comment from nancyjam
Forgiving is not always easy but I think it
is probably the only thing that will save this world.
Christ showed us by example time and again.
Beautiful, thought provoking poem, Dean.
Excellent rhyme and meter.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014
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Forgiving is not always easy but I think it
is probably the only thing that will save this world.
Christ showed us by example time and again.
Beautiful, thought provoking poem, Dean.
Excellent rhyme and meter.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014
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Thank you very much, Nancy. I'm really pleased to know that you enjoyed it.
Comment from l.raven
Hi Dean, this is a wonderful write...in the end we all have to face God....all will have are sins...how we forgive our selves and make them right is up to us...and He will have the last call...so very well thought of...and very well written...Luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014
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Hi Dean, this is a wonderful write...in the end we all have to face God....all will have are sins...how we forgive our selves and make them right is up to us...and He will have the last call...so very well thought of...and very well written...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 27-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014
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Thanks so much for your kind comments, Linda. I truly appreciate it!