The Trining
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "THE PROPOSAL"A man must discover his identity and destiny.
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Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Thank you so much for the glossary. I do truly appreciate it. I have memory 'farts' from time to time. I do truly try to read--I know there are those who don't. You have a very nice writing style~Debbie
reply by the author on 07-May-2014
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Thank you so much for the glossary. I do truly appreciate it. I have memory 'farts' from time to time. I do truly try to read--I know there are those who don't. You have a very nice writing style~Debbie
Comment Written 07-May-2014
reply by the author on 07-May-2014
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Thanks, Debbie, for your kind remarks. And, I know you read it. I hope you jump aboard for the rest of the journey.
Comment from Witwoo
If that beginning text were any smaller, we old folks are gonna have to put or glasses over our glasses.
As usual, I happen across a review that's ten chapters into a book. That makes it difficult to get pulled into a story. I went ahead and looked at it from an editor's viewpoint, and I was happy to find no revisions were needed. Not even an errant apostrophe. Good work, my friend.
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reply by the author on 07-May-2014
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If that beginning text were any smaller, we old folks are gonna have to put or glasses over our glasses.
As usual, I happen across a review that's ten chapters into a book. That makes it difficult to get pulled into a story. I went ahead and looked at it from an editor's viewpoint, and I was happy to find no revisions were needed. Not even an errant apostrophe. Good work, my friend.
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Comment Written 07-May-2014
reply by the author on 07-May-2014
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Thank you, Witwoo! I appreciate that. Ah, the 8 font's my friend for the summaries of chapters past and the Index. These eyes ain't so young either. I'm glad I know the past chapters and the characters in the Index. I appreciate your visit. If you just read the summmaries from 2-9 you'll know pretty much what happened. I hate to lose you!