Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 50 "Do you hold the power of gods "A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Do you hold the power of gods to live with us in peace?
Or war upon your guardian angels, to bring us to our knees
What soul does travel in your world to make a man betray
Is evil carnage living here, to spoon you on your way.
These lines are all very good questions considering the level of violence in the world today. A very thought-provoking write. my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014
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Do you hold the power of gods to live with us in peace?
Or war upon your guardian angels, to bring us to our knees
What soul does travel in your world to make a man betray
Is evil carnage living here, to spoon you on your way.
These lines are all very good questions considering the level of violence in the world today. A very thought-provoking write. my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 20-Aug-2014
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thank you Debbie
Comment from DR DIP
missed acoupleof question marks for the anal poet grammar spag Nazi to pick you up on but who gives a rats it takres nothing away from the rhetorical questions the poem obviously asks. It is a pleasurable read indeed
thanks for sharing
dip
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missed acoupleof question marks for the anal poet grammar spag Nazi to pick you up on but who gives a rats it takres nothing away from the rhetorical questions the poem obviously asks. It is a pleasurable read indeed
thanks for sharing
dip
Comment Written 20-Aug-2014
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Thanks DR for your review, was looking for the spag Nazi ????
Comment from Acquired Taste
Lovely artwork to to complement your offering. I found it very visual and quite thought-provoking. I only wish I could believe the answers would be positive - I suspect there is great disappointment in how man is currently conducting life on this planet. You give much for us to think about. AT=/
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Lovely artwork to to complement your offering. I found it very visual and quite thought-provoking. I only wish I could believe the answers would be positive - I suspect there is great disappointment in how man is currently conducting life on this planet. You give much for us to think about. AT=/
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thank you AT
Comment from James Dooney
Wel I guess it really depends on what yu believe huh. As for the poem once again you have done a great job here with it. Keep it up !
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Wel I guess it really depends on what yu believe huh. As for the poem once again you have done a great job here with it. Keep it up !
Comment Written 20-Aug-2014
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thanks James
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent write, deepwater, I could have sworn I posted a review to this already, but it might have been when the site went down for maintenance and wouldn't save my comment. great imagery presented here about the balance that is important in our spiritual lives.
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this is an excellent write, deepwater, I could have sworn I posted a review to this already, but it might have been when the site went down for maintenance and wouldn't save my comment. great imagery presented here about the balance that is important in our spiritual lives.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2014
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thank you Jax
Comment from Bryan G
Sadly, the starship finds a world of cruelty and injustice. Peace is found at the end of a gun while women are just toys. There are some good things, but a little leaven leaveneth the whole lump. As in the days of Noah so it is in these days of the coming of the Son of Man. There's a star man waiting in the sky. He would like to come and see us but he's afraid he'll blow our minds. (David Bowie) Your poem raises great questions for us in the 21st century.
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Sadly, the starship finds a world of cruelty and injustice. Peace is found at the end of a gun while women are just toys. There are some good things, but a little leaven leaveneth the whole lump. As in the days of Noah so it is in these days of the coming of the Son of Man. There's a star man waiting in the sky. He would like to come and see us but he's afraid he'll blow our minds. (David Bowie) Your poem raises great questions for us in the 21st century.
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Thanks Bryan
Comment from Janet Foor
A thought provoking poem Gary. Many questions unanswered in this life. Breathtaking picture to enhance your words. Interesting concept. Well done.
Janet
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A thought provoking poem Gary. Many questions unanswered in this life. Breathtaking picture to enhance your words. Interesting concept. Well done.
Janet
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Thanks Janet
Comment from G.B. Smith
These are very well asked words. Mankind is at the threshold of a new discovery. I believe he is going to find his humanity. Fathers everywhere hold their children in their hearts as they prepare to die in battle. Keep em together and teach them proper Gospel principles in your home to assure them their birthright
Bear
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These are very well asked words. Mankind is at the threshold of a new discovery. I believe he is going to find his humanity. Fathers everywhere hold their children in their hearts as they prepare to die in battle. Keep em together and teach them proper Gospel principles in your home to assure them their birthright
Bear
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Thanks Bear
Comment from Dom G Robles
Beautiful. Excellent rhyme and rhythm. I love it. Also the picture of the planet Earth and of the manly God
overlooking the planet Earth. At first blast, it caught my attention right away. Beautiful expressions. Congratulations. Dom
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Beautiful. Excellent rhyme and rhythm. I love it. Also the picture of the planet Earth and of the manly God
overlooking the planet Earth. At first blast, it caught my attention right away. Beautiful expressions. Congratulations. Dom
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Thanks Don
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Welcome. Dom
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Do you hold the power of Gods' is an exceptionally well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. I would never attempt to answer this talented poet's rhetorical questions. God though knows all of these answers.
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'Do you hold the power of Gods' is an exceptionally well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. I would never attempt to answer this talented poet's rhetorical questions. God though knows all of these answers.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2014
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Duchess I thank you for this and your review
deepwater, you're more than welcome.
Kindest wishes, the Duchess