Comment from Fridayauthor

Excellent

A very interesting poem with a great choice of words. I had to reread it a couple of times to try and understand it, especially the screams.

Certainly thought-provoking.

A nice posting.

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2015

Comment from Louise Michelle

Excellent

Hi Loanna,

I'm glad I didn't read your notes first because it would have spoiled the ending for me.

At first I thought your protagonist was haunted by a bad memory, now I know it was literally a haunting. Well done.

Hugs,
Lou

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 Comment Written 09-Mar-2015

Comment from Jackreese

Excellent

I really enjoyed this piece. I think your words really were able to describe her fear. I was impressed with this piece because I felt that you painted a very detailed poem. It seems that she knew the voice, wanting it to come, but yet fearing it. At least, that's what I picked up from it! Great job!

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 Comment Written 09-Mar-2015