2015 Haiku
Viewing comments for Chapter 40 "Senryu ( joy and laughter fill )"A collection of haiku I wrote in 2015
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Comment from Joy Graham
Isn't that so true? We love our kids to pieces and they turn around and ask what's for dinner. lol! My kids don't like my cooking now that they're grown. I guess I'm not that good a cook. Best wishes toy you in this contest.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2015
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Isn't that so true? We love our kids to pieces and they turn around and ask what's for dinner. lol! My kids don't like my cooking now that they're grown. I guess I'm not that good a cook. Best wishes toy you in this contest.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2015
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Thank you Joy :)
Comment from TAB_that's me
ha! Great last line for the senryu - it really adds the satire needed - the icing on the cake. Perfect syllable count. Good luck!
Teresa
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2015
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ha! Great last line for the senryu - it really adds the satire needed - the icing on the cake. Perfect syllable count. Good luck!
Teresa
Comment Written 09-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2015
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Thank you Teresa :)
Comment from Neonewman
LOL! Too many times Mom heard these words. My Niece lives across the street from me and has twin 4 year old boys. They are always hungry lol! Loved reading this wonderfully crafted piece you have crafted and wish you all the best in the contest.
God bless!
Steve
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2015
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LOL! Too many times Mom heard these words. My Niece lives across the street from me and has twin 4 year old boys. They are always hungry lol! Loved reading this wonderfully crafted piece you have crafted and wish you all the best in the contest.
God bless!
Steve
Comment Written 09-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2015
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thank you neonewman :)
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You are most welcome!
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You are most welcome!
Comment from robyn corum
awwwww...
First of all, the senyru is a sweet little peek in a woman's life and into a mom's heart and soul. It's not always the big things that fill us and complete us -- it's those tiny, immeasurable things!
And the artwork is precious! Good luck!
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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2015
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awwwww...
First of all, the senyru is a sweet little peek in a woman's life and into a mom's heart and soul. It's not always the big things that fill us and complete us -- it's those tiny, immeasurable things!
And the artwork is precious! Good luck!
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2015
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thank you robyn :)