Senryu (Mom and dad divorce)
senryu contest32 total reviews
Comment from The Mom/DarleneThomson
I burst out laughing at the end of your senryu. That wasn't very nice of me. Please accept my apology. But I absolutely understand mom and would do the same thing. Best wishes in the contest.
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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2015
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I burst out laughing at the end of your senryu. That wasn't very nice of me. Please accept my apology. But I absolutely understand mom and would do the same thing. Best wishes in the contest.
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Comment Written 10-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2015
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LOL! That was my intent Darlene! I wanted it to be relatable and funny. Thank you kindly for the awesome review my friend.
God bless!
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You did a fine job.
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Thank you!
Comment from PoemsOfDD
The last line of this senryu certainly is profound. It can mean many things even though the picture attached feels like it is pulling the reader in a different direction.
Well done and thank you for sharing this poem.
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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2015
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The last line of this senryu certainly is profound. It can mean many things even though the picture attached feels like it is pulling the reader in a different direction.
Well done and thank you for sharing this poem.
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Comment Written 10-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2015
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Thank you DD for this most excellent review!
God bless!