Reflections Of Color
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Comment from Cletus Hardiman
Why not entitle them, "MOVING ON." LOL Just a quick thought! A nicely written poem. Just one thing....Them city lights is not good English....why not try "Those city lights".....Just a suggestion! Cletus Hardiman
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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2015
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Why not entitle them, "MOVING ON." LOL Just a quick thought! A nicely written poem. Just one thing....Them city lights is not good English....why not try "Those city lights".....Just a suggestion! Cletus Hardiman
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Comment Written 08-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2015
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Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Merle Haggard wrote a song called "Moving On". So, unfortunately, that title is taken. Your comments and support appreciated.
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Yes...good old Merle! He wrote a lot of them. Remember "Shade Tree Fix it Man.? LOL I was once in that business. But, there was no one like the Hag!!! LOL Cletus Hardiman