Once upon the heart..
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Midnight Flight"Love poems
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Comment from Kingsland
This is what the poetic arts are all about. Poetic expressionism that just oozes with excellent metaphors and an excellent flow as well. This is an outstanding piece of poetic art that I thoroughly enjoyed reading and writing this response for... John
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2016
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This is what the poetic arts are all about. Poetic expressionism that just oozes with excellent metaphors and an excellent flow as well. This is an outstanding piece of poetic art that I thoroughly enjoyed reading and writing this response for... John
Comment Written 19-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2016
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6???? you so kind!!! This review is making me smile!!! :-)))))) ( that's me)...Thank you so much for this wonderful review and those stars!!! very much appreciated!!!
Comment from winnona
Your artwork and background color completed this piece well. your well-chosen words flowed easily line to line combining and forming the message of the poem for the reader.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2016
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Your artwork and background color completed this piece well. your well-chosen words flowed easily line to line combining and forming the message of the poem for the reader.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2016
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Awe thank you for reading and the great review!!! very much appreciated!!
Comment from sandy montgomery
Great imagery here. The flow is natural the pace perfect. I love the art you chose. I think my favorite thing about the piece is the dream like quality of the piece. It's quite lovely. Thank you for sharing it.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2016
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Great imagery here. The flow is natural the pace perfect. I love the art you chose. I think my favorite thing about the piece is the dream like quality of the piece. It's quite lovely. Thank you for sharing it.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2016
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Sandy! you are so sweet!!! thank you for this great review!!!
Comment from foxangie123
Wow this has such passion within line by line. An amazing picture to go with as well. I could very much relate to wanting to fade into an abyss. Perfect job here.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2016
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Wow this has such passion within line by line. An amazing picture to go with as well. I could very much relate to wanting to fade into an abyss. Perfect job here.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2016
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You are a Dear!!! thank you for reading and another awesome review!!!
Comment from June Sargent
Beautiful kyrielle that definitely enchanted the senses. First, with the lovely artwork. And then the vision of you dangling with a bleeding heart waiting for the realization of your dreams. Well done. Enjoyed it.
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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2016
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Beautiful kyrielle that definitely enchanted the senses. First, with the lovely artwork. And then the vision of you dangling with a bleeding heart waiting for the realization of your dreams. Well done. Enjoyed it.
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Comment Written 19-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2016
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Hi June! thank you for this great review!! much appreciated!!
Comment from Max. Velocity
That is one effective sonnet in its most potent...a love sonnet. I so loved the refrain and the first line repeated in the couplet.
Because of the words you chose this oozed with passion and desire.
Superb
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2016
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That is one effective sonnet in its most potent...a love sonnet. I so loved the refrain and the first line repeated in the couplet.
Because of the words you chose this oozed with passion and desire.
Superb
Comment Written 19-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2016
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AWE you too kind!!! 6? OMGOODNESS...thank you!! super glad you enjoyed my writing!!
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You deserve it......I'm a huge fan of sonnet form. If you read me you'll see what I mean
God Bless for now
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I will read...but at moment in awe of your bio!!
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
Susan, this should be a ten! Your words are incredibly extraordinary!! Soft yet demanding with your couplet *Should fate require you dwell admidst my dreams
Beg, wake me never~from my midnight flight*
I would be here all day writing about how I feel about this truly wonderful piece of poetry. I will let others comment on your meter because I haven't mastered it yet.
A superb writing!!! You are becoming so talented Susan, so talented!!!
Keep up the great writing my friend,,,,,,,, Jimmy
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2016
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Susan, this should be a ten! Your words are incredibly extraordinary!! Soft yet demanding with your couplet *Should fate require you dwell admidst my dreams
Beg, wake me never~from my midnight flight*
I would be here all day writing about how I feel about this truly wonderful piece of poetry. I will let others comment on your meter because I haven't mastered it yet.
A superb writing!!! You are becoming so talented Susan, so talented!!!
Keep up the great writing my friend,,,,,,,, Jimmy
Comment Written 19-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2016
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Jim!! You spoil me!! ( but it's ok)..heheh..I'm happy you liked this one... and I don't mind advice with the meter and such..because I am learning so much!!!!
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You sure have grasped it very well!! A couple more of these sonnets, it will be time think about publishing a book, Susans Sonnets!! I would buy it for sure!! Enjoy your day ,,,,,, Jimmy
Comment from Kooky Clown
I am so sorry to have to give you only two stars there is one really major problem the background is so dark and the lettering is just not coming through enough to read and so I can't read it to give an honest review
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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2016
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I am so sorry to have to give you only two stars there is one really major problem the background is so dark and the lettering is just not coming through enough to read and so I can't read it to give an honest review
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Comment Written 19-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2016
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I know,,,,didn't realize it was shown...was working on it when you reviewed!!
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Why didn't you just send me a note saying..you couldn't read it?
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Because I did not know how to contact you and i thought that it was me, as I thought that you would have seen the problem when you posted it.
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No, I was working on the colors trying to find what I liked...didn't realize you could see it.
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If you post it again so I can see and read it I will upgrade my rating,
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I'll post..not worried about rating. It's disabled..till I'm sure it's all right.