Of Memory's Touch and Forget-Me-Nots
A Contest Entry written in the form of a Sestina35 total reviews
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Love Poem writing prompt.
Your story of love and For get me nots is clear and well written.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the Love Poem writing prompt.
Your story of love and For get me nots is clear and well written.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 23-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Hello Sharon!
Thank you ever so much for your excellent rating and review!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks he speaks of old memories forget me not and tells her about the state, moments of love they had passed , she responds; well written, well done; good luck with the contest. B A CHANGE INSPIRER-WRITER--DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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This speaks he speaks of old memories forget me not and tells her about the state, moments of love they had passed , she responds; well written, well done; good luck with the contest. B A CHANGE INSPIRER-WRITER--DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 23-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Hello Friend,
So appreciative of your excellent rating and thoughtful review!
Thank you!
Comment from fluffnstuff
wosers...this one made me cry. it so reminded me of my parents who were married 67 years...and how my dad choked up when we were coming home from an appointment and he saw my mom. wonderful write in my book. take care Fluff
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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wosers...this one made me cry. it so reminded me of my parents who were married 67 years...and how my dad choked up when we were coming home from an appointment and he saw my mom. wonderful write in my book. take care Fluff
Comment Written 23-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Hello Friend,
So very honored by your exceptional rating and thoughtful review. To witness my parents' demise was the most painful journey I have ever experienced.
Thank you...
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and emotional love poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and lovely art work of the flowers. Best wishes in the contest! Blessings, Teri
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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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This is a very beautiful and emotional love poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and lovely art work of the flowers. Best wishes in the contest! Blessings, Teri
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Comment Written 23-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Hello Teri!
So pleased to hear from you and to know that you enjoyed my poetic offering.
Thank you for your excellent rating and complimentary review...
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you are so welcome! Blessings!
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I do enjoy it a lot my friend! love, Teri
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
What a challenge you must face writing about love without the use of many of those common words we often do want to utilize. I am not sure I have heard of sestina poetry before but I am glad I learned more about it. I absolutely loved your last stanza. It plays so well with your title. Good luck with the contest.
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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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What a challenge you must face writing about love without the use of many of those common words we often do want to utilize. I am not sure I have heard of sestina poetry before but I am glad I learned more about it. I absolutely loved your last stanza. It plays so well with your title. Good luck with the contest.
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Comment Written 23-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Hello Cindy!
So very pleased you appreciate my sestina.
Thank you for your excellent rating and complimentary review!