Miscellaneous Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 30 "Misty"Poems not in other books
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Comment from Ricky1024
Sorry for your loss no matter the Being.
Still important.
This was well Written Rich In Theme and Imagery.
It Read Well and Flowed Well.
Adjective And Objective Contents were Both Excellent And Exceptional.
Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Thanks for This.
Dr. Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2018
Sorry for your loss no matter the Being.
Still important.
This was well Written Rich In Theme and Imagery.
It Read Well and Flowed Well.
Adjective And Objective Contents were Both Excellent And Exceptional.
Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Thanks for This.
Dr. Ricky 1024
Comment Written 28-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2018
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Thanks for the kind words, they're appreciated. Craig
Comment from Lady Jane
What a beautiful tribute you've penned for Misty, CD Richards. I have many animals and will be devastated when, if they leave this cold world before I do. The words are touching and expertly chosen. The image was precious. I wouldn't recommend any changes or revisions. Just a beautiful and touching penning for your beloved Misty. Thank you for sharing with us the memories you share with this precious one.
Janelle
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2018
What a beautiful tribute you've penned for Misty, CD Richards. I have many animals and will be devastated when, if they leave this cold world before I do. The words are touching and expertly chosen. The image was precious. I wouldn't recommend any changes or revisions. Just a beautiful and touching penning for your beloved Misty. Thank you for sharing with us the memories you share with this precious one.
Janelle
Comment Written 28-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2018
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Thanks for the lovely thoughts, Janelle. I really appreciate them. Craig
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Misty is free from pain now & running & playing with all of the other loved animals in Heaven. Your tribute, Craig, is awesome. Great job on the rhymes, the smooth flow, but it is your message of love that stands out. I can tell you had you & she had a special bond. Her picture is beautiful. I love the line about chasing chickens--I can 'see' that clearly. That is priceless. Are you familiar with Rainbow Bridge? It is an awesome website. Please google it. I am sorry for your loss. I know she had a great home while with you. Take care. Jan
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2018
Misty is free from pain now & running & playing with all of the other loved animals in Heaven. Your tribute, Craig, is awesome. Great job on the rhymes, the smooth flow, but it is your message of love that stands out. I can tell you had you & she had a special bond. Her picture is beautiful. I love the line about chasing chickens--I can 'see' that clearly. That is priceless. Are you familiar with Rainbow Bridge? It is an awesome website. Please google it. I am sorry for your loss. I know she had a great home while with you. Take care. Jan
Comment Written 28-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2018
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Thanks very much for the kind words and thoughts, Jan. Your comments are very much appreciated -- Craig
Comment from Gloria ....
Aw this is so sad for you and Jayne, Craig. Hugs. Misty is a darling dog with such cute paws and ears and by the sounds of it was a wee bit of a gentle rebel not unlike yourself. This is a beautiful sonnet for Misty for your reference through all posterity and many thanks for sharing this sad news.
My condolences,
Gloria
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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2018
Aw this is so sad for you and Jayne, Craig. Hugs. Misty is a darling dog with such cute paws and ears and by the sounds of it was a wee bit of a gentle rebel not unlike yourself. This is a beautiful sonnet for Misty for your reference through all posterity and many thanks for sharing this sad news.
My condolences,
Gloria
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Comment Written 27-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2018
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Thanks very much, Gloria. It's the saddest day for us in a very long time. I really appreciate the kind words. Yes, Misty had a mind of her own, but she was a true sweetheart.
Comment from MissMerri
Six stars for a perfectly written sonnet, and six more for the beautifully expressed emotion of this poem. I'm blinking away my own tears imagining how you must feel to lose this beloved friend and companion. Your poem is flawless. I hope expressing your pain this way is in some way helpful. Misty will be greatly missed, of course. She is destined to be a beautiful memory and this poem will cement that, I'm sure. Thank you for sharing your feelings. We can empathize. Caring hugs, MM
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2018
Six stars for a perfectly written sonnet, and six more for the beautifully expressed emotion of this poem. I'm blinking away my own tears imagining how you must feel to lose this beloved friend and companion. Your poem is flawless. I hope expressing your pain this way is in some way helpful. Misty will be greatly missed, of course. She is destined to be a beautiful memory and this poem will cement that, I'm sure. Thank you for sharing your feelings. We can empathize. Caring hugs, MM
Comment Written 27-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2018
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Thanks, MM, for the lovely, kind words. I tossed up whether to post this. But I was up most of the night, and had to do something with the time. Most grateful -- Craig
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I'm very glad you did post it. We needed to share this with you.
Comment from kahpot
What a beautiful poem and tribute to a friend and a loved one, such pets are easily accepted into the family and sadly missed as part thereof, very well done and my best wishes to you****kahpot
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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2018
What a beautiful poem and tribute to a friend and a loved one, such pets are easily accepted into the family and sadly missed as part thereof, very well done and my best wishes to you****kahpot
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Comment Written 27-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2018
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Thank you for the very kind words and good wishes. Both are greatly appreciated -- Craig