The French Letter
Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "Revelations in Montmartre"A Novel
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was a surprise! I didn't give that a thought. Well, that certainly explains a lot but I can't see it ending there. Helen will hopefully find her way and get out of Jeanne's clutches, because I still think there is something about her that is wrong, evil, even. This was a really good chapter, Tony! Well done. :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
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That was a surprise! I didn't give that a thought. Well, that certainly explains a lot but I can't see it ending there. Helen will hopefully find her way and get out of Jeanne's clutches, because I still think there is something about her that is wrong, evil, even. This was a really good chapter, Tony! Well done. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 16-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
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Thanks for the read and review, Helen. It looks as if Charles may soon be joining you in England. All the best, Tony
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LOL! Tony, you always call me Helen! Do you think I'm like your character?? LOL :)) Sandra xx
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Oh, dear! I've just finished writing Chapter 36 and have Helen on the brain! Apologies!
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You're forgiven! LOL, so will we be getting that part soon? :))
Comment from Ulla
Hi Tony, Ahhh, see now that makes a lot of sense with regards to Helen's sexual orientation. That does explain the cryptic behaviour. But is it all. The scene in Montmartre with Kayla and Andre was brilliantly written. And now Charles is roaring through France towards London. I wonder what will happen next. I wish I had a six to give this. All best. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
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Hi Tony, Ahhh, see now that makes a lot of sense with regards to Helen's sexual orientation. That does explain the cryptic behaviour. But is it all. The scene in Montmartre with Kayla and Andre was brilliantly written. And now Charles is roaring through France towards London. I wonder what will happen next. I wish I had a six to give this. All best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 16-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
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Thanks for the read and review, Ulla. I appreciate your kind comments. Charles is on his way to England as I write! Best wishes, Tony
Comment from Teresa Alford
Hey there, good job. This is my first reading of your book. I will definitely go back and read the other chapters. Your story is well written and quick to capture the reader's attention,,,,and keep it. TA ";-)
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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2019
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Hey there, good job. This is my first reading of your book. I will definitely go back and read the other chapters. Your story is well written and quick to capture the reader's attention,,,,and keep it. TA ";-)
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Comment Written 16-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2019
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Thanks, Teresa. I appreciate your review. Best wishes, Tony
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi, Tony,
Such a delicious continuation of the story. I think your characters are so well developed that I can actually see them.
Poor Charles. What is he to do now that he is on his own again?
I can't help but wonder how long it will be before he encounters the women again.
Great job - I look forward to the next installment.
BTW - a few of the prose writers have joined a Prose Posse. We are fanning one another and then reading the posts of anyone who posts - it is the only fighting chance we have against the numbers in the poetry category.
So far, Rob Caudle and Sarkems have been the most faithful to the promise - I propose it each time I read something by a writer I'm not familiar with or who isn't already in my fan list,
~patty~
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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
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Hi, Tony,
Such a delicious continuation of the story. I think your characters are so well developed that I can actually see them.
Poor Charles. What is he to do now that he is on his own again?
I can't help but wonder how long it will be before he encounters the women again.
Great job - I look forward to the next installment.
BTW - a few of the prose writers have joined a Prose Posse. We are fanning one another and then reading the posts of anyone who posts - it is the only fighting chance we have against the numbers in the poetry category.
So far, Rob Caudle and Sarkems have been the most faithful to the promise - I propose it each time I read something by a writer I'm not familiar with or who isn't already in my fan list,
~patty~
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Comment Written 16-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
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Thanks for the review, Patty, and for your kind review. I appreciate the heads-up about the Prose Posse. Who is in it? I'll try to review whenever I can. All the best, Tony