Sensational Discovery
You can't be anything until you know who you are...43 total reviews
Comment from poetwatch
It's early in the morning and it's great to be alive and greet the sayings of inter strength. These are words that are within the soul, Yvette. A yoga master may know them, :) but then again so would a poet. This is a good entry for the 3-6-9 contest.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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It's early in the morning and it's great to be alive and greet the sayings of inter strength. These are words that are within the soul, Yvette. A yoga master may know them, :) but then again so would a poet. This is a good entry for the 3-6-9 contest.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Thanx so much for seeing where I was 'coming from' on this -- so glad you enjoyed my 'the end of the school year is coming, I just KNOW it is' poem!! :) ;) LOL! :) :) Take care, sir, and have a great week! :) ;) Yvette
Comment from Heather Knight
I love the way you mix all the senses here, Yvette. After all, they are all related.
Lovely presentation and words.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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I love the way you mix all the senses here, Yvette. After all, they are all related.
Lovely presentation and words.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Thanx so much for your wonderful comments and your review, Maria -- so glad you enjoyed my 'the end of the school year is coming, I just KNOW it is' poem!! :) ;) Take care, ma'am, and have a great week! :) ;) Yvette
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was very well constructed, and beautifully worded, Yvette. It's like meditation, you let everything wash over you as you find your inner core. It's a lovely way to get to know yourself. This is a really lovely 3-6-9 contest entry, and I wish you loads of luck! :) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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That was very well constructed, and beautifully worded, Yvette. It's like meditation, you let everything wash over you as you find your inner core. It's a lovely way to get to know yourself. This is a really lovely 3-6-9 contest entry, and I wish you loads of luck! :) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Thanx so much for the review, Sandra, and I'm so glad you found a bit of 'serenity' within the lines! :) :) I am always so glad to get your input on things, ma'am -- just counting down the days to summer!! :) ;) LOL! Have a tranquil week, ma'am! ;) :) Yvette
Comment from damommy
A lovely way of telling us to be still and find out who we are. Does one ever really know oneself? Hard to say.
Lovely artwork to go with your beautifully written poem. I like how you did those first lines.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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A lovely way of telling us to be still and find out who we are. Does one ever really know oneself? Hard to say.
Lovely artwork to go with your beautifully written poem. I like how you did those first lines.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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That's a really good question, Yvonne -- a little easier without all those hormonal swings of yesteryear, though, yeah?! :) :) LOL! :) Thanx for the review and the smile this morning -- you have a wonderful week in the Ark! :) :) Yvette :)
Comment from tfawcus
You've built a good poem from this trio of 3-6-9s. The accumulation is stronger than the parts. Your cause and effect construction is particularly effective. A well balanced account of the benefits of meditation.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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You've built a good poem from this trio of 3-6-9s. The accumulation is stronger than the parts. Your cause and effect construction is particularly effective. A well balanced account of the benefits of meditation.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Thanx so much for your wonderfully thoughtful comments, Tony -- I do so enjoy hearing from you, sir!! ;) ;) I hope you find some tranquil moments in your week, sir, and take good care out there! :) Yvette :)
Comment from JudyE
I enjoyed your poem and the similar way the second lines start. Also the way you've put unfamiliar phrases together as in 'touch - silence' and 'taste - stillness' which isn't what you usually come across. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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I enjoyed your poem and the similar way the second lines start. Also the way you've put unfamiliar phrases together as in 'touch - silence' and 'taste - stillness' which isn't what you usually come across. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Good morning, Judy -- thanx so much for stopping in for this one, ma'am!! :) Glad you enjoyed... took some time to scrawl this one at the end of last week...seems the weeks get longer about this time as I'm counting down to exams next month! :) :) LOL! :) Take care and find some tranquil moments in your week! :) Yvette
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is the true state of meditation and feeling calm and tranquil. To hear ourselves and our heart beating and soothe our souls it takes peaceful silence to reach our inner dogma, I felt the peace in your words Yvette, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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This is the true state of meditation and feeling calm and tranquil. To hear ourselves and our heart beating and soothe our souls it takes peaceful silence to reach our inner dogma, I felt the peace in your words Yvette, love Dolly x
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Thanx so much for the review, Dolly, and I'm so glad you found a bit of 'serenity' within the lines! :) :) Have a tranquil week, ma'am! ;) :) Yvette
Comment from lyenochka
What a soothing poem! I feel like you're asking me to take deep breaths and enjoy being in the Lord's peace. I wonder if I have some color issues with my eyes but the last stanza's font color was hard for me to read. Could be just me.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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What a soothing poem! I feel like you're asking me to take deep breaths and enjoy being in the Lord's peace. I wonder if I have some color issues with my eyes but the last stanza's font color was hard for me to read. Could be just me.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Changed the font color to a more basic red... was just looking for some of the 'main colors' in the print... interesting how some of those font colors have an almost psychedelic effect to them! :) ;) Thanx for the heads-up, ma'am, and thank you for the lovely review! :) ;) Have a great week! :) Yvette
Comment from Dawn Munro
Show-off. (LOL) You are so talented, my friend. It's such a pleasure to read your work. This one is sublime. I want to slow down right now and read it again and again...
Best of luck with the judges, though I honestly doubt you'll need it!
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Show-off. (LOL) You are so talented, my friend. It's such a pleasure to read your work. This one is sublime. I want to slow down right now and read it again and again...
Best of luck with the judges, though I honestly doubt you'll need it!
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Oh, Dawn, I'm so glad you enjoyed this one -- and thank you for those stars!! ;) :) You know, this one was written out on the front porch at the end of last week.... ugh, let's just say the teacher is ready for the year to be over with!! ;) LOL! :) Thanx, O Lady of the North, and have a great week! ;) Yvette
Comment from A Little Bird
Congratulations on an beautiful peice of work. This is what I love about spending time alone; it helps me fall back in love with myself. Good luck with the competition!
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Congratulations on an beautiful peice of work. This is what I love about spending time alone; it helps me fall back in love with myself. Good luck with the competition!
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Wow, Abby!! :) You have just put a huge smile on my face this morning with those lovely stars, ma'am -- I can't imagine starting off my day with any better way than grinning while dealing with classes of teenagers - LOL! ;) :) Seriously, though, Abby, I am so glad this touched you and helped you smile as well! :) :) Take care and have a great rest of the week! :) :) Yvette