Five Minutes
Never waste a minute.38 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is very fast work indeed! He he he, I do believe when you meet someone you have an idea if things will go well or not, but beware as we sometimes do get it wrong. But not here! A happy ending and I loved it, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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This is very fast work indeed! He he he, I do believe when you meet someone you have an idea if things will go well or not, but beware as we sometimes do get it wrong. But not here! A happy ending and I loved it, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and insightful comments dear Dolly. I?m glad you enjoyed my flash fiction entry. Sending you my best today as always, Sally xo
Comment from poetwatch
How time flies forever into the past. Every second of our lives should be cherished with smile and good cheer. Though, sometimes rain slides down the windowpanes, we will overcome those gloomy days. Sally, we both are racing to see who gets the golden ring. :) We got 5 years to go. How about you? This is a good entry for the 100 Words Flash Fiction.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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How time flies forever into the past. Every second of our lives should be cherished with smile and good cheer. Though, sometimes rain slides down the windowpanes, we will overcome those gloomy days. Sally, we both are racing to see who gets the golden ring. :) We got 5 years to go. How about you? This is a good entry for the 100 Words Flash Fiction.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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Six years to go, Jose. We are right behind you and your wife. It feels golden already, we love each other so much. Thanks for the excellent review and kind compliments. It?s always good to hear from my dear poet.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal :+)
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements beautifully by telling a complete and moving story in exactly 100 words. Your approach is really quite clever for it allows you to change scenes several times which is almost impossible to accomplish even once with Flash Fiction. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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This meets the contest requirements beautifully by telling a complete and moving story in exactly 100 words. Your approach is really quite clever for it allows you to change scenes several times which is almost impossible to accomplish even once with Flash Fiction. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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Thank you, dear angel. It is always so good to hear from you and I?m so glad you enjoyed my flash fiction entry. Sending you my best today as always, Sally xo
Comment from MISS SHERRY1
What a presentation!! Superb poetry and a massively powerful video. It made me cry and stop and think about my own life, which is at minute four... Excellent work - just excellent.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2019
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What a presentation!! Superb poetry and a massively powerful video. It made me cry and stop and think about my own life, which is at minute four... Excellent work - just excellent.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2019
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Miss Sherry!!!!!!!! My sweet friend, where have you been? I am crying as I respond in thanks. I love and have missed you so. Ah, just to know you?re back makes me appreciate life and relationships even more. Thank you for the wonderful review and generous six stars. More than that, is your return. I trust you are feeling better and strengthened. will watch eagerly for your posts.
Sending you my best today with love,
Sally xoxoxo :+))))
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Sally, you are one of the best parts of being back!! Sharing this world with you is joyous. I will watch for your posts with great eagerness.
Comment from Lance S. Loria
I absolutely love this flash fiction! Very creative. Very special emotion. A great tale of relationship memories. I wish you the very best in the contest. Clearly no edits or adjustments necessary from me.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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I absolutely love this flash fiction! Very creative. Very special emotion. A great tale of relationship memories. I wish you the very best in the contest. Clearly no edits or adjustments necessary from me.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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Thank you for the superb review and six stars, Lance. Your kindness means so much to me. I?m glad you enjoyed my contest entry.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally :+))
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Five minutes to a lifetime of love... what an awesome approach and beautiful implementation for your contest offering, Lady Sal -- even with only those 100 words, you had little tears welling up in my eyes! ;) Sometimes it seems like it wasn't even five minutes, does it? :) ;) [of course, there's always the times that you're not sure you'll make 50 years... lol!] Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;) ;) Yvette
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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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Five minutes to a lifetime of love... what an awesome approach and beautiful implementation for your contest offering, Lady Sal -- even with only those 100 words, you had little tears welling up in my eyes! ;) Sometimes it seems like it wasn't even five minutes, does it? :) ;) [of course, there's always the times that you're not sure you'll make 50 years... lol!] Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;) ;) Yvette
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Comment Written 28-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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I love to make you cry because you make me cry all the time. LOL! Thank you for the sweet review and so glad you enjoyed it unto tears.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xo
Comment from Cindy Warren
My, you move fast. I get it. Life is short. Time goes fast. It seems like only a minute ago you were young lovers, then young parents. Now they're grown and you're celebrating your 50th anniversary. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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My, you move fast. I get it. Life is short. Time goes fast. It seems like only a minute ago you were young lovers, then young parents. Now they're grown and you're celebrating your 50th anniversary. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 28-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and kind comments. Yes p, life does move very fast?feels like minutes.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment from Ben Colder
And our new wedding goes on. True love never stops, and always finds a way to say three special words. Good one Sal I see nothing wrong and compliment you for a job well done. Love is blind, marriage is an eye opener
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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And our new wedding goes on. True love never stops, and always finds a way to say three special words. Good one Sal I see nothing wrong and compliment you for a job well done. Love is blind, marriage is an eye opener
Comment Written 28-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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Yes, true love never stops. My ongoing theme in life. Thank you for the wonderful review and kindest compliments. It always makes my day.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal :+))