Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Dreams Unfold"Musings of an old man -2020
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Comment from Minglement
You have penned a magical triolet which captured my imagination. Loved your whole presentation from the beautiful artwork to your wonderful repeat lines. Good job :)
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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You have penned a magical triolet which captured my imagination. Loved your whole presentation from the beautiful artwork to your wonderful repeat lines. Good job :)
Comment Written 20-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Minglement, I always appreciate your good wishes.
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I enjoyed it very much :)
Comment from amada
Wow, talented poet. I have a thing for dreams and stars, or rather my own dreamland...It's sort of an essay. Maybe I should resurrect it and post it in FS, Thanks for the memory.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Wow, talented poet. I have a thing for dreams and stars, or rather my own dreamland...It's sort of an essay. Maybe I should resurrect it and post it in FS, Thanks for the memory.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Amada, go for it! If you penned it, I personally believe, that there is someone for whom those words will bring, perhaps, piece, comfort, hope and promise!
Comment from royowen
It's so important to pick two strongly worded repeating lines in the triolet, and I guess you were always going to succeed, because of your undoubted talent. This is an excellent triolet, you've nailed Jim, I love this form. well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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It's so important to pick two strongly worded repeating lines in the triolet, and I guess you were always going to succeed, because of your undoubted talent. This is an excellent triolet, you've nailed Jim, I love this form. well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 20-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Roy, Wow! Outstanding validation on this piece. I am beyond words of appreciation
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Well done
Comment from Lil' Mormon Boy
Very good Triolet. I enjoyed reading it. You were able to capture thoughts together to make it sound as if you were traveling through the cosmos. I thought you did a great job.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Very good Triolet. I enjoyed reading it. You were able to capture thoughts together to make it sound as if you were traveling through the cosmos. I thought you did a great job.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Lil' Mormon Boy, I am so appreciated of your comments.
Comment from Natalie Goodwin
Good work with the Triolet. I've never attempted it myself. You used a lot of vivid images. I especially liked "Dreams unfold casting nets at distant stars" and "A sprinkling of stardust healing life's scars." It's a hopeful poem.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Good work with the Triolet. I've never attempted it myself. You used a lot of vivid images. I especially liked "Dreams unfold casting nets at distant stars" and "A sprinkling of stardust healing life's scars." It's a hopeful poem.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Natalie, thank you. I stumble across this poetic style and found it to be a great challenge. Isn't so very amazing how many ways words can be played down with ink onto a paper to just soothe.
Comment from Harley Dayman Rayne Quinn
Very cool poem that I had the honor to read.
Very cool wording and I love the pictures that was connected with it
Kudos to you
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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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Very cool poem that I had the honor to read.
Very cool wording and I love the pictures that was connected with it
Kudos to you
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Comment Written 20-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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I am privileged to have your kind comments sent back!
Comment from lyenochka
Great job with your triolet. I thought normally it's in iambic but your lines seem to throw in some trochee feet. But you dressed the poem nicely with alliteration, assonance and consonance and gave the poem an ethereal feel.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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Great job with your triolet. I thought normally it's in iambic but your lines seem to throw in some trochee feet. But you dressed the poem nicely with alliteration, assonance and consonance and gave the poem an ethereal feel.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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Thank you,
Comment from JP Writer
Very impressive! What a lovely poem, with rich images packed into a strict structure, perfectly matched with the image you selected. I look forward to checking out more of your work.
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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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Very impressive! What a lovely poem, with rich images packed into a strict structure, perfectly matched with the image you selected. I look forward to checking out more of your work.
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Comment Written 20-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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Jayne, I am very privileged to have your your kind comments. Thank you so much!
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
OH my goodness, what a wonderfully worded triolet. The rhyming and descriptive words make this a unique piece and the flow makes it fun to read. I truly love this one
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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OH my goodness, what a wonderfully worded triolet. The rhyming and descriptive words make this a unique piece and the flow makes it fun to read. I truly love this one
Comment Written 20-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Barb, Oh my! I can never thank you enough for your supportive comments and this six-star review.