Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
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Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
This is a very well written free verse poem that I thoroughly enjoyed. The imagery denotes a confusion of faith and a reluctance to commit though there is a yearning.
'While the bells, now sit silent,
I hear the whisper of words --
Just Believe ...
Just Believe ...
Just Believe ... I like this. :)Ralf
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reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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This is a very well written free verse poem that I thoroughly enjoyed. The imagery denotes a confusion of faith and a reluctance to commit though there is a yearning.
'While the bells, now sit silent,
I hear the whisper of words --
Just Believe ...
Just Believe ...
Just Believe ... I like this. :)Ralf
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Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Ralf, I was hoping that you would enjoy this free verse. Thank you for your quick read.
Comment from Diana Kane
This was wonderful. Heartbreaking and hopeful all at the same time. I totally enjoyed reading it. there is a wonderful insight here. Excellent job. Thank you for sharing.
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reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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This was wonderful. Heartbreaking and hopeful all at the same time. I totally enjoyed reading it. there is a wonderful insight here. Excellent job. Thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Diane, I am so pleased that this free verse was a pleasant read for you, I appreciate your comments.