Life Ranching
Ranching is a cyclic business50 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
This is a wonderful tyburn poem, love the use of your words and the message that your last two lines give, very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
  |
This is a wonderful tyburn poem, love the use of your words and the message that your last two lines give, very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
-
kahpot, thanl you
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
This is a great poem. This was a very difficult poetic form. I couldn't get this one to work so didn't even do it. Good luck with the contest. I hope this one wins.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
 |
This is a great poem. This was a very difficult poetic form. I couldn't get this one to work so didn't even do it. Good luck with the contest. I hope this one wins.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
-
Amanda, thank you for the six, I worked it again and again this is a difficult poetic dtylr
-
It shows.
Comment from joycetreasures
Hello,
I pray your day is going well. I know nothing about cattle ranching. This is my first critique of a western poem and this is a good one. You met the poem's requirement. I like the photo your used of the three black and white cows. The life of ranching has to be an interesting one from day to day. Such as, being around cows all day long and ensuring they are well taken care of through some crazy weather. Cow ranching does well, I believe in good economic times, and bad in recessions. I guess, there's plenty leading and feeding of the cattle stock. Your are correct, ranching is a cyclic business. I enjoyed reading your poem. Well-done.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
|
Hello,
I pray your day is going well. I know nothing about cattle ranching. This is my first critique of a western poem and this is a good one. You met the poem's requirement. I like the photo your used of the three black and white cows. The life of ranching has to be an interesting one from day to day. Such as, being around cows all day long and ensuring they are well taken care of through some crazy weather. Cow ranching does well, I believe in good economic times, and bad in recessions. I guess, there's plenty leading and feeding of the cattle stock. Your are correct, ranching is a cyclic business. I enjoyed reading your poem. Well-done.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
-
Joyce I thank you so much for your kind thoughts. This poetic form is new to me and I admit the style is far from my free verse comfort zone. However, I do these contests to expand my knowledge of all the exquisite styles that makes poetry so ever lastingly unique.
-
You are welcome. Good job!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Tyburn poem about life ranching where there us constant leading to proceed and the feeding nevef seem to end with live stock on hand means a lot of work.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
|
A very well-written Tyburn poem about life ranching where there us constant leading to proceed and the feeding nevef seem to end with live stock on hand means a lot of work.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
-
Sandra, thank you
Comment from Bobby Cunningham
Very interesting style that this particular contest required and you did it perfectly. The picture accompanying this poem is perfect. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
|
Very interesting style that this particular contest required and you did it perfectly. The picture accompanying this poem is perfect. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
-
Bobby and Millie, This poetic form is new to me and I admit the style is far from my free verse comfort zone. However, I do these contests to expand my knowledge of all the exquisite styles that makes poetry so ever lastingly unique.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Ranching is a cyclic business
Life Ranching
Hello, anonymous,
A fine entry for the Tyburn Poetry writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and tyburn form. Sounds like life at the farm.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2020
|
Ranching is a cyclic business
Life Ranching
Hello, anonymous,
A fine entry for the Tyburn Poetry writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and tyburn form. Sounds like life at the farm.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2020
-
Thank you!
Comment from Eternal Muse
Oh, what a delightful Tyburn for the contest! Your visuals amazing - I can just picture these cows on a farm somewhere in a rural Pennsylvania (lol) grazing. Excellent picture and artistic presentation. I wish you a lot of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2020
|
Oh, what a delightful Tyburn for the contest! Your visuals amazing - I can just picture these cows on a farm somewhere in a rural Pennsylvania (lol) grazing. Excellent picture and artistic presentation. I wish you a lot of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2020
-
Eternal Muse thank you
Comment from Mastery
I don't believe I have ever come across this format for a poem before, author. Called a Tyburn, eh?
It certainly is different from start to finish.
Here's wishing you the best of luck with it in the contest. : ) Bob
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2020
|
I don't believe I have ever come across this format for a poem before, author. Called a Tyburn, eh?
It certainly is different from start to finish.
Here's wishing you the best of luck with it in the contest. : ) Bob
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2020
-
Thank you
-
You are welcome. ;) Bob
Comment from karenina
I recall writing these...guess they fell off my form's list! Not my favorite form as the flow is necessarily broken and list like...you pull this out with your final two lines in which you incorporate your "list" without seeming forced at all. Good luck int he contest!--Karenina
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2020
|
I recall writing these...guess they fell off my form's list! Not my favorite form as the flow is necessarily broken and list like...you pull this out with your final two lines in which you incorporate your "list" without seeming forced at all. Good luck int he contest!--Karenina
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2020
-
Thank you
-
You are welcome! --Karenina
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and
presentation.
-A well written poem.
-Very good descriptive
words with added alliteration.
-The concluding lines are
very good with the right
syllable count, rhyme, and imagery.
-A good entry; good luck.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2020
|
-Nice image and
presentation.
-A well written poem.
-Very good descriptive
words with added alliteration.
-The concluding lines are
very good with the right
syllable count, rhyme, and imagery.
-A good entry; good luck.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2020
-
Thank you
-
You are welcome.