Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
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Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear JLR, I find this post carried me with you into the wild blue sky where anything can happen, even the images you saw way out there beyond the limits of my imagination. An excellently written poem to contribute to your free versers event.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2020
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Dear JLR, I find this post carried me with you into the wild blue sky where anything can happen, even the images you saw way out there beyond the limits of my imagination. An excellently written poem to contribute to your free versers event.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2020
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Suzanna, I am very grateful for your review and positive comments.
Comment from elchupakabra
This is a great free verse, it feels relaxing in part because of the smooth rhythm and tone but also the chosen aesthetic. Really great work on this piece, thanks for sharing. Later daze.
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This is a great free verse, it feels relaxing in part because of the smooth rhythm and tone but also the chosen aesthetic. Really great work on this piece, thanks for sharing. Later daze.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much for the validation with this free verse poem.
Comment from Roberta Lawrinsky
So much blue, so little time!
What is more reassuring than nature's blue skies?
--seemingly out of reach yet always there--
& what's more bold than going beyond blue skies
into the mysteries of the cosmos?
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2020
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So much blue, so little time!
What is more reassuring than nature's blue skies?
--seemingly out of reach yet always there--
& what's more bold than going beyond blue skies
into the mysteries of the cosmos?
Comment Written 09-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2020
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Roberta, thanks for the time you spent reading and commenting on my free verse poem.
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gladly
Comment from Mastery
Brilliant writing, my friend. You caapture moods and images all in this wonderful poem.
You seem to have a never-ending treasure trove of great thoughts.
"searching for a moment of tranquility and calmness
that slows the rhythm of my heart thumping."
Stay safe, Jim. :) Bob
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Brilliant writing, my friend. You caapture moods and images all in this wonderful poem.
You seem to have a never-ending treasure trove of great thoughts.
"searching for a moment of tranquility and calmness
that slows the rhythm of my heart thumping."
Stay safe, Jim. :) Bob
Comment Written 09-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2020
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My dear friend, your kind words are a strong validation to my efforts. have a splendid week.
Comment from roof35
This is a very well written poem for your free verse club challenge. Your illustration pairs perfectly. I especially like your closing lines, "Guiding my soul onward. Nicely done.
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This is a very well written poem for your free verse club challenge. Your illustration pairs perfectly. I especially like your closing lines, "Guiding my soul onward. Nicely done.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review and comments.
Comment from RShipp
I believe you have met the requirements of the challenge: Write a free verse poem about the word/color BLUE.
My favorite line ... "seeking healing and understanding."
Enjoyed.
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I believe you have met the requirements of the challenge: Write a free verse poem about the word/color BLUE.
My favorite line ... "seeking healing and understanding."
Enjoyed.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your review and kind comments!
Comment from Susan X Smith
I enjoyed reading this poem. The free verse style works well here. The tone is aspirational and the mood is one of calm and tranquility. The picture is a fitting complement.
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I enjoyed reading this poem. The free verse style works well here. The tone is aspirational and the mood is one of calm and tranquility. The picture is a fitting complement.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2020
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Susan, thank you very much for your review and comments, have a splendid week.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
An infinite journey into the mind's abyss -- really enjoyed this surreal tumble you've taken us on here, JL! Great formatting to pull the reader deeper into contemplation... :) Thanx for sharing! ;)
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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2020
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An infinite journey into the mind's abyss -- really enjoyed this surreal tumble you've taken us on here, JL! Great formatting to pull the reader deeper into contemplation... :) Thanx for sharing! ;)
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Comment Written 09-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2020
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Yvette, thank you, may your forthcoming week be full of good things.
Comment from TommyWrites
This is a truly beautiful poem JLR!
I started reading it...and I felt this sort of peace. I love the whole aspect of the poem. Stars, night, guiding soul, etc. It's really beautiful and touching.
Thank you for sharing!
TommyWrites~
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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2020
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This is a truly beautiful poem JLR!
I started reading it...and I felt this sort of peace. I love the whole aspect of the poem. Stars, night, guiding soul, etc. It's really beautiful and touching.
Thank you for sharing!
TommyWrites~
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Comment Written 09-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2020
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Tommy, thank you for your review, comments and kind validation.